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2014高考英语书面表达基础训练题(14)及答案
【2014高考英语广东省华侨中学四模】 读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)
阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
In junior high school, one of my classmates, Ethan, was addicted to TV. This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who’s the Boss?
Then one day Ethan’s mother made him an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjects. She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV. None of us thought Ethan could do it, but he did quit TV. His mom paid him $200. He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find.
In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying
kids with cash for showing up or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will. Psychologists warn that money can actually make kids perform worse by making the act of learning cheap. The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should be despite decades of reforms and budget increases.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论,内容包括: (1) 你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法:
(2) 你的父母(或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的; (3) 你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习 【写作要求】
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引
用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】
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【参考范文】读写任务:
Ethan's mom used money for encouraging him to be devoted to learning, but she failed. In fact, kids are happy to be rewarded with money while some teachers and psychologists are upset. (32 words)
Rewarding a child with cash is a common phenomenon in reality, and it does even 概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
become a trend. Form where I stand, I am not in favour of encouraging kids with cash. To get kids motivated to learn, we should not treat every child in the same way. To some students, oral praise is essential and adequate. However, this method may not work well with other kids. Maybe what counts more to them is to watch a movie or go on a trip together with their parents. It just depends. My parents used to encourage me by leading me to have more reading. Whenever I made progress in my studies, they bought me my favourite books, which not only motivated me, but also helped me get along well with my studies.
In conclusion, schools and parents should educate their kids by teaching them to study for themselves and the society rather than simply offering them money to do something passively. Only by building up some noble and long-range aims can they study on their own initiative.
高中英语书面表达中的高级词汇替换例举
1.occur 替换think of
It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house. 2.devote to替换spend
He devotes all his spare time to reading. 3.seek to do 试图,企图干 seek after=seek for 寻求
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I’m an average student. 5.but替换very
The film we saw last night was very interesting. → The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. 6.seat 替换sit
He found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried. 7.be supposed to=should
He is supposed to have driven more slowly. 8.appreciate 替换thank you for
I deeply appreciate your kindness in coming so far to meet me. 9.on替换as soon as
As soon as he arrived, he began his research. → On his arrival, he began his research. 10.due to替换because of
Due to poor management, the factory is deeply in debt. 11.cover替换walk/read
After covering 10 miles, we all felt tired. 12.contribute to 替换 write, donate等 He contribute an article to China Daily.
The association has contributed a sum of money to the Red Coss. Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study. 13.round the corner 替换coming soon/ nearby The summer vacation is round the corner. Li Ming studies in a school round the corner. 14.come up with替换think of
Jack is very clever. He often comes up with new ideas. 15.set aside替换save
Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books. 16.be of + n. 替换adj.
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17.refer to 替换talk about/of, mention The professor you referred to is very famous. Let me refer to my notes for the exact figures.
18.can not but do / can not help but do替换have to do 19.more often than not替换usually
More often than not , the meaning of many words can be easily guessed. 20.be absorbed in 全神贯注于be addicted to 沉溺于 替换 be lost in Now many kids are addicted to playing net games. 21.more than替换very
If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help. 22.do sb a/the favor 替换help
Would you please do me the favor to turn down the radio? 23.the other day替换a few days ago
The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. 24.in the course of替换during
In the course of the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety. 25.the majority of替换most
The majority of the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema. 26.consist of替换be made up of
Our class consists of ( is made up of ) 50 students. 27.be worn out替换 be tired / broken
After five hours’ non-stop work, we were all worn out (tired). My shoes are worn out (broken). Please buy me a new pair. 28.attend to替换look after
She hanged up hurriedly and attended to the baby. Meanwhile, the meal got burnt. 29.on condition that替换as long as
You can go out on condition that you wear an overcoat. 30.nevertheless替换however
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31.express one’s satisfaction with替换be satisfied with They expressed satisfaction with their lives. 32.spare no efforts to do替换try one’s best to do
To be competitive on the world market, we must spare no efforts to improve the quality of our products. 33.many a 替换many
Many a quarrel has come about through a misunderstanding. 34.be occupied in doing 替换be busy in doing
Time spun away when we were occupied in repairing the farm tools. 35.a handful of替换 some
He allowed only a handful of his many compositions to be published during his lifetime. 36.(in the) meanwhile替换at the same time
I went to college. Meanwhile, all my friends got well-paid jobs. 37.occasionally替换sometimes /once in while
I like playing football best, but occasionally I play table tennis, too. 38.for instance替换for example
For instance, the two patterns below are considered the same. 39.seldom替换not often
I'm a night owl and seldom will I go to bed until after midnight. 40.wealthy替换 rich
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【2013界广东省东莞市2013届高三上期末调研测试】
读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)
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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
A little boy was playing in his sandbox. He had with him his box of toy cars and trucks and a red plastic shovel(铲). In the process of creating roads in the soft sand, he discovered a large rock in the middle of the sandbox.
The boy dug around the rock, managing to get it out from the dirt. With a little bit of struggle, he pushed the rock across the sandbox by using his feet.When the boy got the rock to the edge of the sandbox, however, he found that he couldn't roll it up and move it to the wall.
Determined, the little boy tried again, pushed, and shoveled, but every time he thought he had made some progress the rock rolled and then fell back into the sandbox. The little boy struggled, pushed, and pulled; but failed.
Finally he burst into tears. The boy's father watched him from his living room window all the time. At the moment the tears fell, a large shadow fell across the boy and the sandbox. It was the boy's father. Gently but firmly he said, \didn't you use all the strength available? \did, Daddy, I did! I used all the strength that I had!\\son,\corrected the father kindly. \words the father picked up the rock and removed it from the sandbox. [写作内容]
1.以大约30个词概括短文要点;
2.以约120个词就人生需要帮助的话题谈谈你的想法,内容包括: (1)你读完文章的感受;
(2)以你的亲身经历谈谈帮助的重要性; (3)今后你是否也会帮助别人,为什么? [写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用自己亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; [评分标准]
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【参考范文】读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)
A little boy had some difficulty in removing a big rock from the sandbox. Though he tried hard, he still couldn't move it. Finally his father helped him and he managed. After reading this passage, I think highly of the father's words. He helped his son realize the importance of help. Similar things also occurred to me. I still remember last summer holiday when I travelled in Beijing on my own. Unfortunately, I lost my baggage, I was penniless and I couldn't go home. It was with the help of the local police that I was able to return home safely. What I experienced has taught me a lot. Help is very important for us, and we will benefit from other's help. There is no doubt that I will offer help as much as possible if I find someone who is in trouble. Help is a good virtue, which will make problems solved more easily, make people feel the warmth of others, and make our lives better and better.
【2013界广东省惠州4月模拟】 基础写作(共1小题.满分15分)
你接受了一项写作任务,用英语写一篇简短的报道。 【写作内容】
上周末,义工组织“绿色家园”在滨江公园开展了回收利用的宣传活动。活动内容如下, 回收的必要性: 回收的途径 回收的作用:
【写作要求】
只能使用五个句子表达全部内容。 【评分标准】
日常生活中,找们常过度消费资源,如:各类包装袋的使用 包装袋可多次使用等 减少资源的消耗,保护环境 - 7 -
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句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
参考词汇:绿色家园Green Home 过度消耗overconsumption
【参考范文】基础写作:(One possible version)
In Binjiang Park last weekend, a voluntary organization called “Green Home” launched a campaign to promote recycling. As can be seen in our daily life, overconsumption of resources has become a common practice, making it urgent to arouse people’s awareness of recycling. There exists the popularity of various kinds of packing bags for goods and what we are supposed to do is to reuse them. In this way, we will consume less resource so the environment is protected to some extent. Besides, if we try our utmost to recycle everything reusable in our life, we can also save some money.
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