【英语】中考英语书面表达易错题经典

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【英语】中考英语书面表达易错题经典

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

1．假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提示如下:（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞（do square dancing）。（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但…… 要求：（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Boys and girls,

I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.

A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.

In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise. That’s all. Thank you! 【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，根据要点提示写一篇学校英语兴趣小组的活动中的发言稿。要注意随着文章推进时态的变化，一开始应该选择一般过去时，而后面应该选用一般现在时，最后表达自己观点的时候也应该使用一般现在时。人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致关系，构思文章框架，列举出可能会用到的好词好句，记住千万不能漏写信息要点。参考词汇就是必用词汇，一定要运用到文章当中。在写作中注意运用恰当的连词，使文章更加顺畅，自然。

2．书面表达

难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。要点如下： 1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.

2. 地点:六楼会议室 3. 活动内容：

1）对老师用话语表达谢意；2）与同学交流自己的将来的梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言等等。

参考词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos.. 备注：词数100左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。 Boys and girls,

The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________ 【答案】Boys and girls,

The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.

We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other. Don't be late! That's all. Thank you! 【解析】【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。而复杂单句结构In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。现状大约70%学生眼睛近视主要原因 1. 睡眠不足 2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等 1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动 2. 养成正确的用眼习惯 … ….（至少一条）预防方法你的观点参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted 要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes. Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.

In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.

I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them. 【解析】【详解】

这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成正确的用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。（I think ???；try one's best to do sth.）。

常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

4．近年来雾霾天气在中国许多城市频频发生。雾霾天气引起大家极大的关注。请你用

英语写一篇有关雾霾的短文向校刊“英语角”投稿,内容包括： 1. 雾霾的危害 2. 雾霾产生的原因（2个） 3. 应对雾霾的措施（3个）提示：雾霾 smog poisonous 有毒的

注意：1. 词数110左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

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【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.

Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks.

How does it come about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly come as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.

What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear completely. 【解析】【详解】

这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍有关雾霾的情况，题目中给出了写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使

用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。

5．书面表达

共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的‘“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给《21世纪英文报》写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。 1.随处可见，出行方便诸多优势 2.有益健康，减少污染 3.费用不高，负担得起存在问题你的观点 1.未及时归还 2.占道挡路我认为……（考生自拟，至少2点）注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2―3句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。 3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.

Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.

I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们给《21世纪英文报》投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，