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高考英语一轮复习专题25基础写作教学案

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the field.

→______________________________________________________(名词作状语) 答案 Warned of the storm, the farmer was still working in the field. Ⅱ.按要求转译句子

1.多吃蔬菜和水果有益健康。

We benefit more from eating fruit and vegetables.

①______________________________________________________(it作形式主语) ②______________________________________________________(动名词作主语) 答案 ①It is good for our health to eat more fruit and vegetables. ②Eating more fruit and vegetables does good for our health. 2.汤姆努力学中文。他想在中国找份工作。

Tom studies Chinese very hard. He wants to find a job in China. ①______________________________________________________(不定式作状语) ②______________________________________________________(用短语替换并连接两句话)

答案 ①Tom studies Chinese very hard to find a job in China. ②Tom works hard at Chinese in order to find a job in China.

tries his best to study

3.我们一到达,就受到了当地人的热烈欢迎。

As soon as we arrived, we were warmly welcomed by the local people. ①______________________________________________________(用介词短语) ②______________________________________________________(用hardly... when倒装句)

答案 ①On/Upon our arrival, we were warmly welcomed by the local people. ②Hardly had we arrived when we were warmly welcomed by the local people. 4.我们可以用这种方法按时完成任务。 We can finish the task on time in this way.

①______________________________________________________(倒装句) ②______________________________________________________(强调句型) 答案 ①Only in this way can we finish the task on time. ②It is in this way that we can finish the task on time. 5.我们很惊讶地听说他通过了这次考试。

We were surprised to hear that he passed the exam.

①______________________________________________________(用介词短语作状语) ②______________________________________________________(用it作形式主语) 答案 ①To our surprise, he should pass the exam.

②It is surprising for us to hear that he passed the exam. Ⅲ.完成句子

1.尽管因特网有很大帮助,但我认为花太多的时间在上面不是好主意。

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______________________, I don't think it's a good idea to spend too much time on it.

答案 Although/While the Internet is of great help/Helpful as/though the Internet is

2.当今,父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情,这使得这些孩子们非常依赖父母。 Nowadays

parents

have

done

everything

for

their

single

children,_________________________.

答案 which makes the children rely/depend on their parents badly 3.如果你能以每个10美元的价格卖这些中国结,我将不胜感激。 I would appreciate_________________________.

答案 it if you could sell the knots for 10 dollars each

4.据报道,大约30名至少18岁的志愿者将从世界各地被选出来于2015年前奔赴火星。 __________________about 30 volunteers__________________will be chosen from all over the world to the Mars by the year of 2015.

答案 It is reported that; who are at least 18 years old

5.它不仅给了我们接近大自然的机会,而且能让我们在学习之余得到放松。 It_________________gave us a chance to get close to nature, ___________gave us relaxation from our study.

答案 not only; but also

Ⅳ.短文改写——请用高级词汇改写画线部分

目前,中学生利用寒暑假打工现象引起了社会广泛关注,赞成和反对的声音此起彼伏。请根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文。

1.简单阐述此种现象;

2.你对此种现象的明确态度……(给出充足的理由) 3.你认为该如何使用打工赚的钱?

①补贴家用?②自己花?……(给出合理的解释) 注意:1.词数120~150;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 考生作文

Recently more and more teenagers do part-time jobs to earn extra money during the summer or winter vacation. Opinions on this ①are_different from person to person. Some are ②for it while others ③disagree.

I think it is ④good for us high school students to take part-time jobs in our spare time. It can earn some money ⑤and_also broaden our views and ⑥make our holiday life rich_and_colorful because we can learn what we can't learn in classes. What's more, through part-time jobs we can get some working experience which will ⑦prepare us for our future.

I hold the view that it's better to help pay our family living expenses instead of keeping it as our own pocket money. It is a good ⑧chance for us to take on an

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important responsibility for our family.

One Possible Version:

Recently more and more teenagers do part-time jobs to earn extra money during the summer or winter vacation. Opinions on this ①vary from person to person. Some are ②in_favor_of it while others ③are_against it.

I think it is ④meaningful for us high school students to take part-time jobs in our spare time. It can ⑤not_only earn some money, but_also broaden our views and ⑥enrich our holiday life because we can learn what we can't learn in classes. What's more, through part-time jobs we can get some working experience which will ⑦equip us for our future.

I hold the view that it's better to help pay our family living expenses instead of keeping it as our own pocket money. It is a good ⑧opportunity for us to take on an important responsibility for our family.

Ⅴ.作文优化

据报道,我国学生近视率居世界第一。造成这一现象的原因是多方面的,请你以“Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?”为题,写一篇英语短文。

主要内容包括: 1.造成学生近视的原因; 2.如何保护视力。 注意:1.词数120左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.短文的开头已经写好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:近视率 rate of myopia

Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?

It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world.________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________

考生作文:

Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?

It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world.

The

causes

of

myopia

are

complicated.

②③

Too_much_homework_leads_to_the_lack_of_time_for_exercise_and_a_good_sleep._

Long_time_of_studying_makes_eyesight_hard_to_refresh. ④Medical research shows genetic factors also ⑤cause poor eyesight. ⑥Many students don't form good eye care habits. ⑦When reading, some students hold books too close to their eyes.

⑧When_we_realize_the_reasons_of_this_result,_it's time for us to take

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measures to protect our eyes. ⑨I_think encouraging students to engage in more outdoor activities can help the students refresh their eyes.

按以下要求将文章改写:

(1)在①④⑥⑦的位置加上过渡词__________________________ (2)序号②的句子改为强调句型____________________________ (3)序号③改为

it

作形式宾语,不定式作真正宾语的句型

________________________________________________________

(4)序号⑤⑨改为短语___________________________________ (5)序号⑧改为分词作状语_______________________________ 答案:(1)①Firstly,④Secondly,⑥In addition,⑦for example

(2)It is too much homework that leads to the lack of time for exercise and a good sleep.

(3)Long time of studying makes it hard to refresh their eyesight. (4)⑤contribute to/result in, ⑨As far as I am concerned/In my opinion (5)Realizing the reasons of this result

易错题一:中式英语

[例] ①Volunteers must at least 8 years old. ②They make a preparation not return to the earth. ③We will select about 30 volunteers go to the Mars.

[错因分析] 考生未能掌握中英句子结构的区别,而将汉语连动句直接翻译成了英语。 [心得体会]

易错题二:句子越复杂越好

[例] Suzhou is an interesting city which is famous all over the world being

polluted by human beings when the modern industralization is taking place all the global while Yangzhou is a local city which is famous for Shouxi Lake which is compared to the second west lake in Hangzhou.

[错因分析] 考生把定语从句,非谓语动词,状语从句用到一个句子里,显得句子高端,但出现语法错误,而且句意不明确。

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[心得体会]

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高考英语一轮复习专题25基础写作教学案

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