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高考英语一轮复习专题25基础写作教学案

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汇有三大技巧:

①标新立异

写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩,别人有可能想不到的词汇,恰当地求新求异。

I received your e-mail last week, but I am busy preparing for my final exam, which is important for me, so I didn't reply to you without delay.

→I received your e-mail last week, but I am busy preparing for my final exam, which is vital for me, so I didn't reply to you without delay.

上周我收到了你的邮件,但我在忙着为对我来说很重要的期末考试做准备,因此没能及时地给你回复。[山东高考满分作文]

②短语优先

多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。

Developing a good habit is also of great importance. 养成良好的习惯也相当重要。[江西高考满分作文]

On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. 我代表我们学校,想表达一下对你们的热烈欢迎。[陕西高考满分作文] ③避免重复

尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词,必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. 我喜欢阅读而我的弟弟喜欢看足球比赛。 (2)活用高级结构 ①使用非谓语动词

I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way.

我很珍惜这本书,因为它向我展示了如何用积极的方式保持友谊的平衡。[重庆高考] ②使用被动语态

I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.

我记得我们计划7月份去云南旅行,但是现在由于我的左脚受伤了,我无法按计划与你一同前往。[北京高考]

③使用强调句

As a saying goes, the little thing matters most.

→As a saying goes, it is the little thing that matters most. 正如一句谚语所说的:小事情最重要。[上海高考] ④使用倒装结构

In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.

简言之,这种收录不仅污染了汉语,而且也可能引发中国人之间的隔阂。[重庆高考]

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⑤使用感叹句

It is a very splendid moment.

→How splendid a moment it is![辽宁高考] ⑥使用with复合结构

With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups:“For” and “Against”.

随着英语词汇在媒体以及日常生活中的普及,一本汉语词典里收录了239个英文单词,这一现象使公众分成了对立的两派:支持派和反对派。[重庆高考]

⑦使用虚拟语气

Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. 此外,我希望班内学生别太多。[全国卷Ⅰ] ⑧使用形式主语或形式宾语

As the number of English learners is on the rise, it's not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.

因为英语学习者的数量在不断增加,对他们来说在中文语境中理解这些词并不困难。[江苏高考]

⑨使用名词性从句

I strongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply. 我强烈推荐你读一读,并把你的收获在你的来信中与我分享一下。[重庆高考] That is why I recommend another category of books, literary books. 这就是我推荐另一类书——文学书籍的原因。[浙江高考] ⑩使用定语从句

The best gift I've ever received is a book from my English teacher, which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday.

我收到的最好的礼物就是我的英语老师度假归来带给我的一本书。[重庆高考] ?使用状语从句

The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret.

为了不说和不做你将来会后悔的事情,重要的一点就是学会控制你的脾气。[安徽高考] (3)巧用衔接过渡词

衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间,段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡性词语是非常必要的。高考作文中常用到的过渡性词语归纳如下:

①表示罗列递进

first, second, third; firstly, then/next, after that, finally; for one thing..., for another...; on (the) one hand..., on the other hand...; besides/what's more/in addition/furthermore/moreover/another/also; especially/in particular等。

Firstly, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in

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the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.

首先,我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好,接着我扫去所有家具上的灰尘,然后我扫地、拖地。[陕西高考]

②表示时间的过渡词

now, at present, recently, after, afterward, after that, after a while, in a few days, at first, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally, immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment, from now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, not... until, when, while, as, during等。

Soon afterward, a second entrance was opened for us to the parking place. 从那之后不久,(学校)又为我们在停车的地方开了一个入口。[北京高考满分作文] ③表示转折关系

but, however, while, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, instead等。

Some people support it while others do not. 有人支持,然而其他的人反对。[江苏高考] ④表示并列关系

or, and, not only... but (also)..., as well as, both... and..., either... or..., neither... nor...等。

Our teachers are kind to us and treat us as their friends. 我们的老师对我们很好并把我们当朋友对待。[天津高考] ⑤表示因果关系

because, therefore, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to, owing to, due to, therefore, as a result (of), so... that, such... that等 。

Besides listening to teachers carefully in class, we often study deep into the night. Therefore, I believe I can succeed.

除了课上认真听老师讲课之外,我们经常学习到深夜。因此,我相信我能成功。 ⑥表示条件关系

as/so long as, on condition that, if, unless等。

As long as we stick to our dreams, we will become a winner sooner or later. 只要我们坚持梦想,我们迟早会成为赢家。[湖南高考] ⑦表示举例

for example, for instance, such as, take... for example等。

They are of different shapes, such as diamonds, butterflies, flowers and birds. 它们形状各异,诸如像钻石、蝴蝶、花和鸟。[全国卷Ⅱ] ⑧表示概括归纳

in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general, generally speaking等。

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高考英语一轮复习专题25基础写作教学案

汇有三大技巧:①标新立异写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩,别人有可能想不到的词汇,恰当地求新求异。Ireceivedyoure-maillastweek,butIambusypreparingformyfinalexam,whichisimportantforme,soIdidn'treply
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