【题文】
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike来信询问你寒假期间与父母去北京旅游的见闻。请你用英语写一封回信。要点如下:
1.北京历史悠久且充满现代信息，人民友好； 2.参观了名胜古迹，品尝了当地小吃； 3.外国人很多，是国际化城市； 4. 你的感想。 注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可是适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mike,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear from you. As you know, during the winter vacation, my parents and I made a short trip to our capital—Beijing. It is a modern city with a long history. People there are friendly. We visited many places of interest such as the Great Wall and The Bird’s Nest. We tried different kinds of local food. too. I saw many foreigners working or travelling around Beijing, which is becoming an international city. It attracts people from all over the world. I enjoyed my trip very much. In addition, I am happy to see my country getting stronger and more developed. Looking forward to your coming to China. Best wishes.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信
息。第一，1.北京历史悠久且充满现代信息，人民友好；2.参观了名胜古迹，品尝了当地小吃；3.外国人很多，是国际化城市；4. 你的感想。第二，人称为第一人、二、三称。第三，时态为一般过去时和一般现在时。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为两段。第一段，1.北京历史悠久且充满现代信息，人民友好；2.参观了名胜古迹，品尝了当地小吃；3.外国人很多，是国际化城市；4. 你的感想。第二段，期待回复。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: friendly，modern，enjoy, stronger, developed, attracts ,hear from，made a short trip, a long history, places of interest ,the Great Wall, The Bird’s Nest, local food, travel around ,international city, from all over the world.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子: as引导的定语从句As you know, during the winter vacation, my parents and I made a short trip to our capital—Beijing. Which引导的定语从句I saw many foreigners working or travelling around Beijing, which is becoming an international city. 第五步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:如as引导的定语从句As you know, during the winter vacation, my parents and I made a short trip to our capital—Beijing. Which引导的定语从句I saw many foreigners working or travelling around Beijing, which is becoming an international city.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。 【标题】河北省张家口市2024-2024学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷 【结束】
河北省张家口市2024-2024学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷
