2020山东省高考英语模拟试题 读后续写下水范文（详解版）
一、续写原题
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事短文。续写的词数为150左右。
Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray(流浪)dog, until he came to me.
I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.
It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.
There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.
It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?
I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.
The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. “Shall we keep him with us?” I questioned my mom.
Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.
Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.
Paragraph 1: One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、下水续写
总体思路
第一段第一句：Spotty回家，断了一条腿。 作者当时的反应是什么？
看到了什么？ Spotty状态描写。
为什么会断了一条腿？(最难处理)
作者一定是误解了，对Spotty有过激的反应。 Spotty逃跑。
到处寻找，但找不到。 一段时间以后得知真相。
第二段第一句：一年以后，我们听到Spotty在气喘吁吁地叫。 看到了什么(骨瘦如柴)？
为什么Spotty叫起来气喘吁吁？ 看到Spotty的情感反应？做了什么？ 为什么Spotty回来？(最难处理)
心理的感受是什么？为此做了什么？ 但几天以后，Spotty还是死了。
作者的心情及感悟是什么(呼应开头...especially his eyes)？
Paragraph 1: One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. “Oh, no!” I let out a loud scream as I saw Spotty limping in with a pained expression on his face. But Spotty seemed to take no notice of me and hid under the bed, his whole body trembling and his eyes full of terror and distrust. It was so unlike him to react like this, that for one moment I was at a loss how to coax him to me. Feeling a little upset and furious, I somehow came holding a long stick, trying to drive him out. However, before the stick reached him, Spotty suddenly howled and escaped through the door. In the next few days, we searched everywhere for Spotty, but in vain. Later, we were shocked to learn that a man beat him with a stick when Spotty was approaching a little girl.
Paragraph 2: Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. We rushed out of the house only to see my Spotty lying on the doormat, dying. Upon seeing us, Spotty rose awkwardly to his feet, wagging his tail and his eyes sparkling with excitement. Immediately, I knelt down to hug him and tears began to well up in my eyes uncontrollably. Spotty looked at me, licking my cheeks as if to tell me something. And it was at that moment that I realized why Spotty returned to me — he had forgiven me for what I had done. Unfortunately, Spotty didn’t stay long and he closed his eyes forever the next day. Many years has passed since Spotty left us, but the valuable lesson he taught me will remain in my memory.
读后续写和概要写作讲义 2020山东省高考英语模拟试题
