【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。
20．（·吉林省实验中考模拟）B）初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想。 要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
2.语句流畅，过渡自然，语法正确，富有逻辑性。 3. 注意时态的正确使用，80-100词。
提示词语: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her.
I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others. 【解析】 【分析】
本文一篇话题作文。 【详解】
英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：交代写作目的：即将毕业，想和大家分享这三年的经历。 第二部分：具体介绍三年中最难忘的经历：别人帮助我的经历。 第三部分：总结全文。我愿意帮助别人。
[英语]九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧讲解及练习题（含答案）含解析
