As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.
From the book, I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 为题作演讲，向同学们介绍一本自己读过的好书。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：A good book can……，My Life Story by Helen Keller is……，It is about……，we should……，we are supposed to……，let’s read……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我读过的一本好书的名字，接下来介绍我读这本书的时间，所读的内容以及阅读这本书的原因，最后鼓励大家多读好书。此处by doing
sth, come across, give in, run away, be supposed to, find out, not only, but also, let sb do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
16．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟）Writing.
In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?
Now please write a passage of about 80-120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:
1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it. 2. What’s the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.
3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children.
【答案】First of all, two-child policy is the gift for some only child.For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.
In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy things.I can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely. If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population. 【解析】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如first of all，grow up，grow older，marry with，burden on，have to do， take care of，by oneself，have no playmate，the number of等。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much better.等多种表猜测句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
17．（·重庆中考模拟）书面表达（原创）
今年春节，很多人加入了抢红包的游戏，但也有人表示担忧。学校英语校刊《英语天地》对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就此次调查的结果进行总结，并谈谈你自己的观点。
Agreement 1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun 2.bring people closer, make more friends spend too much time. not have enough communication with family members, feel lonely 1. 2. Grabbing red packets on line （75%） Disagreement （25%） Your opinion
提示词：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line抢红包注意：（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文章应包括题中所提的所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； （3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonely
Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it's obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. What's worse, it may lead to the crime.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校进行的关于春节抢红包这件事的调查结果进行总结，并谈谈自己对这件事情的看法。题目中给出了一个表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏的人们的观点以及反对这个游戏的人们的观点和理由，只给了一些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这些要点用正确的英语表达出来，并使文章内容更加丰富、完整。最后还要加上自己的看法。因此文章的内容应主要包括三部分：支持的人们的理由；反对者们的理由；自己的看法，可以分成两段或者三段来叙述，这样可以使文章结构清楚，有层次。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构出发，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。为提升文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂的句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、表达流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整、结构清晰。文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出的，因此了文章的话题。第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏的人们各自的理由；第三段中作者发表了自己的看法。其次短文中语言得体，句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章以一般现在时态为主，特别注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范、准确。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones.等等。文章中也出现了一些语法上的小错误，总的来说，不影响整篇文章的质量。
18．（·南通市通州区金北学校中考模拟）书面表达
阳光中学为了丰富学生的课余生活，每学期都会举办各种各样的活动。请根据提示，为校
报写一篇有关的报道。
篮球比赛 活动 内容 航模制作 英语演讲 …… 你的 观点 强身健体, 团队精神 了解科学, 培养兴趣 练习口语, 提高能力 …… ……（请自拟至少两点内容） 注意：
1. 必须包含所给要点, 省略号部分适当发挥, 不要简单翻译； 2. 词数90左右, 开头已写好, 不计入总词数； 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.
_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.
If you are a sports fan, you can join in the basketball games. It can not only make you strong and healthy but also help you learn teamwork. For those who are interested in science, model making is a good choice. Students get to know more about science and develop interest in it. If you want to practice your spoken English, you can’t miss the English speeches. It can improve your abilities as well. There is also an art festival. Those who are good at singing and dancing can take an active part in it. You can show your talents and become more confident.
In my opinion, taking part in those activities helps us reduce our stress of study and every student enjoys a colourful school life. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍学校在业余时间举办的各种各样的活动。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第二，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如there are……，If you are……，It can not
only……，It can improve……，Those who are……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们有各种活动可以选择，接下来介绍各种活动的内容，最后表达参加各种活动的意义。此处all kinds of, choose from, join in, be interested in, know more about, want to do sth, be good at, take an active part in, help sb do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
19．（·江苏中考模拟）临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组 的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一 份素质报告． Name Characteristics Hobbies Honour Problems Your suggestions Tommy 聪明、大方（各举一例） 喜欢看书，认为看书有很多好处（请列举 2 个好处） 他在家帮助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（举 一例）。今年，学校授予了他优秀学生奖（Award for Best Student） 面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠． （根据实际情况提 2 点建议）… 要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.
【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest. 【解析】
这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。
[英语]九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧讲解及练习题（含答案）含解析
