[英语]九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧讲解及练习题（含答案）含解析

【答案】I remember

How time flies, my junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale.

When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.

Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children.

It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better. 【解析】 【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如come to an end，plan to do，a lot of，hold a charity sale，prepare for，in our spare time，hold on，at first，come to join us，give us some help，in the end，a lot，in need等。而复杂并列结构It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us.和When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

7．（·合肥市五十中学东校中考模拟） 诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。 请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下： 1、简述事件；2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。 注意：

1、词数80—100； 2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；

3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；

4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise

Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours, Tony

【答案】The Importance of Promise Dear editor,

People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.

Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.

Yours, Tony

【解析】 【分析】

本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。 【详解】

首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。 【点睛】

文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通顺。

8．（·广西中考模拟）近几年来，一些学校开设了一些兴趣班（interest classes）或特色课（special classes）, 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见。以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文，发表在校园网的英语论坛上。

一些学生 另一些学生 你 观点 有必要 没有必要 … 理由 1. 培养兴趣, 并获得更多的知识；2. 提高生活技能 1. 浪费时间，对学习没有帮助； 2. 给学生带来很多压力 … 提示语：develop one’s interests; get more knowledge; improve one’s life skills; a waste of time; cause a lot of stress

要求：1. 短文应包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.

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Thank you!

【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.

Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.

However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.

In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.

Thank you!

【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，并且已给出了内容提示，所以我们在写作时要围绕所给内容提示展开。

根据作文要求，可以确定文章的时态是一般现在时; 在表达观点时通常会用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出观点的词语。另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出观点，使文章更有条理，次序。 【点睛】

这是一篇比较优秀的作文。首先内容完整，第一段摆出事实，第二段说明别人的的观点，最后说出自己的观点，在表达观点时有条理有次序。 短文中使用了一些很好的词及短语，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有连贯性，及好的句型表达，例如：Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study等。

9．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达

某英文报社组织了题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括： 1. 该谚语的含义；

2. 体现该谚语含义的个人经历。 a） A friend in need is a friend indeed. b） Where there’s a will, there’s a way. 参考词汇：谚语 proverb

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【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend Indeed

A life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.

Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought. Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.

Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always come to you when you need help. 【解析】 【分析】

这是命题作文。二选一，第一个是“患难见真情”，第二个是“有志者事竞成”。 【详解】

标题都是以谚语的形式出现，所以考生第一步做的是理解这两个言语的意思，选择自己较有把握的。在选择标题之后，根据所给内容提示，进行写作。写作时，先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体

10．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达

三年初中生活即将结束，在你学习和成长的路上一定得到了不少人的鼓励，支持和帮助。虽然你就要和一些人说再见了，但总有些人是你一生都难以忘记的。请以I’ll never forget _______为题，谈谈你最难忘的人。老师、好友，家人，同桌还是…… 基本信息：（1）Who is he/she? （2）What kind of person is he/she? （3）What did he/she do for you ? （4）Why is he/she unforgettable?

参考词汇：loving, strict, understanding, patient, friendly, generous, reliable, intelligent, optimistic, humorous, confident, honest, helpful… 要求：1.补全标题；

2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名

3. 介绍他/她的具体情况以及对你的影响； 4. 词数不少于70词。 I’ll never forget _______

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I’ll never forget my English teacher

In my junior school life, many people have helped me. The person I want to thank most is My English teacher-Ms Lee.

Ms Lee is kind and outgoing. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.

I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.

I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. 【解析】 【详解】

本文属于话题作文，谈谈你最难忘的人。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如help sb with, be in trouble, encourage sb to do, with one’s help, make great progress, become interested in, once以及cheer up。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：