【英语】九年级下册必备英语书面表达技巧全解及练习题(含答案)
一、英语书面表达
1.近日,某中学 “iPad进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动,请根据右侧表格提示的内容,用英语写一篇征文。
1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学 学生们认为 2.很新鲜,学习更感兴趣 3.…… 家长们认为 1.影响孩子视力 2.增加家庭负担 1.…… 2.…… 你的观点
注意:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,观点可作适当发挥; 3)词数:90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】iPads, coming into the classrooms
Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.
The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better. However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.
I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.
【解析】根据题目要求,需要书写一篇议论文,探讨iPad进课堂这一现象,以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态,第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式,首先在第一段提出问题现象,第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处,第三段描
述反对人的观点及原因,最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语,固定句型,使文章增色。 点睛:对立观点式 第一段:提出现象。
第二段:Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.
They point out the fact that _______________________支持X 的第一个原
因。 They also argue that _____________________________支持X 的另一个原因。 第三段:However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X.
They firmly point out that ________________________反对X 的第一个理
由。 An example can give the details of this argument: ________________一个例子。 第四段:There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.
In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2.假如你是班长李华,今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息,给 David写一封电子邮件,告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。 比例 50% 30% 20% 你的计划 计划 去国内外旅游 多读一些书 参加社会实践 ? (至少一个) 原因 1.放松;2.欣赏美景 1.增长知识;2.培养兴趣 1.锻炼自己;2.结识朋友 ?(请你补充)
注意:
(1)邮件应包含所有要点
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数); (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分 注:社会实践 social practice activities Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
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Best wishes! Yours Li Hua
【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities. Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如how to do,spend a meaningful summer vacation,half of,plan to do,travel at home and abroad,enjoy the beautiful scenery,take part in,social practice activities,make new friends 等。而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3.书面表达
根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
每年春节,每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱(lucky money)。随着生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱,有些甚至通过微信(WeChat)或支付宝(Alipay)收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱,让自己的钱用得更有意义?请结合自己的实际写一篇文章,词数 80 词以上,文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下: 1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途;
2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议(至少 3 点);
3. 呼吁大家节约用钱,把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。
【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.
In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.
All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way. 【解析】 【详解】
每年春节,每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱(luckymoney)。随着生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱,有些甚至通过微信(WeChat)或支付宝(Alipay)收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱,让自己的钱用得更有意义?这是一篇给材料作文,本题所给材料比较详细,写作中注意将所给内容表达出来,不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称,时态为一般现在时态,注意谓语动词的变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。 【点睛】
文章使用了很好的短语和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。
4.题目②
“持之以恒,方得始。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情,都需要持之以恒的精神。
某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事(爱好,习惯……),你是怎样做的,以及你的感受。
提示词语:keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud 提示问题:1. What did you do? 2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7,I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates,I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes,I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced,I tried my best to keep
running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future. 【解析】 【分析】
本篇是材料作文,根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事;文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。 【详解】
1.本篇要求根据所给材料,用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事,根据提示,描写“What did you do?用一般过去时,描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主题,文句通顺。
2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”,正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格,通过克服困难、不懈地努力,坚持跑步,到现在比以前会跑;结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响;文章结构清晰,前后呼应。
3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。比如:固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of;不定式in order to;try my best to;状语从句so…that …;比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等;短语多彩、文句表达多样。
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5.环境保护人人有责, 如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球 保护自然资源,相信我们的家园会越来越美好。
某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么,为改善环境我们能做什么,以及你的期望。
提示词语: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action
提示问题:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish? Now there are many environmental
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