TEM4命题作文的写作模式及语言参考 年份 作文题目 1999 A Advantage/Disadvantage Advertising on Television 2000 The Importance of 学生生观点说说明文 活 明 题材 题型 体裁 Major 社会现利弊讨议论文 of 象 论 Extracurricular Activities 2001 Travel Broadens the Mind 大众生观点说说明文 活 明 2002 The Best Way to Stay Healthy 大众生提出建说明文 活 议 2003 The Importance of Keeping a 大众生观点说说明文 Good Mind 活 明 2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing? 社会现观点讨议论文 象 论 2005 My Idea of a University Arts 校园文提出建说明文 Festival 化生活 议 2006 Saving Money or Spending 大众生观点讨议论文 Tomorrow’s Money 2007 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? 活 论 社会现观点讨议论文 象 论 2008 The Benefits of Volunteering 大众生观点说说明文 活 明 2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the 社会现观点讨议论文 Environment?
1. 比较选择类作文20%
2. 观点说明类作文（意义、重要性、危害性等）30% 3. 观点论证类作文 30% 4. 现象解释类作文
5. 提出建议、解决问题类作文 20%
观点说明类作文（意义、重要性、危害性等）
1.典型题眼：The Importance of …/Travel Broadens Mind The harm of … 2.结构模板
第一段：引出要说明的事物，明确自己对这一事物的态度（赞同或反对，应该
不应该，重要否？有利还是有害？）
第二段：第一句：承接首段观点，对本段容及其发展方式加以限制（一般用举
例法），说明重要性(危害性、有利之处)表现在以下几个方面：
象 论 分主题一：重要性(危害性、有利之处)之一（一句话）+拓展观点（2-3
句）；
分主题二：重要性(危害性、有利之处)之二（一句话）+拓展观点（2-3
句）；
第三段：结论：重要性+建议或展望（危害性+警示；有利性+建议）
Directions: People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from
education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write a composition on the following topic: The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood
The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood
Competition is one of the traits of the society. Heated competition in career and education has exerted great pressure on people, which brings about many physical illness and mental problems. In my opinion, a good mood is critically important for us under whatever situations.
The importance can be shown in the following two aspects. For one thing, a good mood is beneficial to our health, both physically and mentally. People who are always gloomy, according to traditional medicine, have more chances to suffer from physical illness such as
kidney pains. On the contrary, keeping a good mood, we can keep ourselves relaxed and therefore can keep calm and optimistic in difficulties. Therefore, a good mood keeps the doctors (including mental healing) away. For another, with a good mood, we are likely to work more efficiently. In a good mood we are more willing to cooperate with others, and are more willing to listen to others’ advice. With such relaxation, it is easy for all the people to cooperate to figure out solutions to the problems. Therefore, it is not exaggerating to say that a good mood is the precondition of high working efficiency.
From the reasons we have presented above, we can surely come to the conclusion that keeping a good mood, we will be healthier, and in a good mood, we are more likely to succeed in our career.
语言模板：
…A plays a very important role in …
The importance of A lies in the following aspects. Firstly A is necessary to… Secondly, A can also…
From what are discussed above, we can naturally draw the conclusion that A is essential to… Therefore, we should…
Directions: Currently, there has been a heated discussion on whether it is appropriate for college students to rent an apartment and live outside campus. Write an essay about this issue to state your opinion.
The Harms of College Students’ Renting and Living Out
There is a popular tendency that college students live in rented houses, enjoying their freedom. No matter how popular it is nowadays, however, I hold a disapproving opinion to such a behavior.
Money is the first and the most important reason for me to say “no” to this practice. Renting a house out of campus would cost them much more money on water supply, electricity supply, house maintaining and so on. This is a heavy burden for college students who are still economically independent. Why not spend such money on books or studying materials?
The second reason for my disapproval is that living out of campus and separating from your classmates would bring about much communication inconvenience and consequently lead to little sense of belonging to your class, which will block you from much informal but useful information while talking with your pals.
TEM4命题作文的写作模式与语言参考
