May you recover soon. Yours, Li Hua
本文要求用英文给Amy写一封慰问信,鼓励Amy与病魔斗争。考生在写作时可遵循以下几点:(1)审题,信中不得出现考生的真实情况,词数100左右;(2)确定要点:自我介绍,得知她的情况,表示鼓励,打算为她做什么,最后祝她早日康复;(3)扩展要点,丰富要点,将句子补充完整;(4)连句成篇,将句子连成短文,打好草稿;(5)全面检查,检查草稿,修改拼写、标点符号错误,修改人称、时态、句子结构逻辑错误。另外应考虑语篇的结构、句式的变化和词汇的丰富。(6)书写要规范,字母贴近横线写。
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假设你是张华,你的朋友李明在骑车上学的途中遇到车祸,腿受伤并在医院接受了手术。请你代表全班同学给他写一封慰问信,表达以下几点信息:
1.听说他住院并接受了手术,表示慰问; 2.你们将在周六上午去看望他; 3.将会帮助他补习所缺的功课; 4.愿意提供任何可能的帮助。
文章必须包含以上要点,词数为100~120。 【范文】
Dear Li Ming,
How are you now? All of us are worried about you. We were shocked when we heard that you were knocked down by a truck while cycling to school. We are sorry to have learned that you have had an operation on your injured leg and that you have to stay in hospital. Let us hope that it will be for only a very short time, and that you will soon be out of hospital. Everybody here sends his best wishes to you for a quick recovery.
We’ll come to see you on Saturday morning. We have decided to help you with your lessons that you have missed. So, don’t worry and be patient. If there is anything we can do for you, please let us know when we come. We are always ready to help you.
Hope you will recover soon. Yours, Zhang Hua
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假如你是李华,最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说,由于刚进入高中,还不能适应新的环境,不知道如何去结交新朋友,因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。
1. 向Jenny表示问候和慰问; 2. 针对她的问题提出以下建议: ① 放学后邀请同学一起参加活动; ② 你的同学遇到麻烦时,你去帮助他们; ③ 你遇到困难时向同学求助。 注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Jenny,
I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school.
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【范文】 Dear Jenny,
I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. I’d like to talk about it with you.
In fact, in your senior high school, your classmates are also new and facing the same problem, so you don’t have to worry too much about it. There is also something that you can do to change this situation. First, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school. This will help you understand each other better than communicating with others. Then, help your classmates when they are in trouble and ask them to help you when you have difficulty. I believe you will make many new friends and you will have a happy school life there. Best wishes Li Hua
2024届二轮复习书面表达分类写作指导学案之九:慰问信



