2024-2024年中考英语书面表达专题(含答案)
一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析） 1．书面表达
每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。
要求：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80词左右。 A（n） _________ I have
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A（n） toy gun I have
Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.
In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.
When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.
Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!
【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。 写作亮点：
这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用了时态。在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定的意义。最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），
上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。
2．书面表达
难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。
注意:1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;
2.短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺; 3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”为题，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文
意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。文中 not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表达了自己愿望与想法，使文章增色不少，值得学习。
3．共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。 社会现状 自从出现，饱受赞誉。 随处可见，出行方便 诸多优势 有益健康，减少污染 费用不高，负担得起 存在问题 你的观点 未及时归还 占道挡路 我认为------ 参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles
注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。 3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.
【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are
2024-2024年中考英语书面表达专题(含答案)
