Section Ⅳ Writing — 如何回复电子邮件
[写作任务]
假定你是李华，来自美国的笔友Peter给你写了一封电子邮件。请根据邮件内容给他写一封回信，表明你的观点并说明理由。
Dear Li Hua，
Long time no see you. How are you?
A new law has been passed in my city. Smoking has been banned in all public places. I think it is a wise decision. Do you think so?
Yours， Peter
注意：1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter，
I'm pleased to receive your email.__________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________
Best wishes， Li Hua
[写作指导] 一、审题定调
该写作要求考生回复一封电子邮件，表达对公共场合实施禁烟令的看法。
电子邮件主要由称呼、正文和落款构成。本写作开头和落款已给出，故考生只需写正文部分。
二、谋篇布局
根据所给提示，我们可以将正文分为三部分： 第一部分：表明观点(赞成公共场合禁烟方案)；
第二部分：说明理由(易导致疾病、影响他人健康、污染空气、易引发火灾)； 第三部分：总结全文(避免在公共场合吸烟)。 常用表达
I'm more than pleased to have received your letter. I learned from your letter that... Knowing that you are interested in...， I'm writing to share my opinions with you. In your letter you asked me why...
Different people hold/have different opinions.
People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards... ...of them are in favor of the idea that...
Some people believe that...; others argue that... About 20% of the students surveyed said...
As far as I am concerned, we should...
If you need further information, please don't hesitate to contact me. You can call me at...or e-mail me. 三、组织语言
第一部分：表明观点(赞成公共场合禁烟方案)。
普通表达 高级表达 ·As for banning smoking in public, I ·I strongly support the government's decision to ban smoking in public. approve of (赞成) the law. ·Regarding smoking in public, I am strongly in favor of banning it. 第二部分：说明理由(易导致疾病、影响他人健康、污染空气、易引发火灾)。 普通表达 高级表达 ·Smoking is a bad habit and very harmful ·Smoking is a dangerous habit that does to people's health. ·It makes it easier for smokers to get various diseases. ·At the same time, secondhand smoke can harm to not only the smoker, but also those around him or her. ·It increases the possibility/chances of getting deadly diseases. also badly affect other people's health, ·It could put you in danger of/at risk especially babies'. ·Cigarette smoke can pollute the air inside a building and stay there for a long time, which stops people from breathing freely. ·Smoking may also cause a fire and result of getting various deadly diseases. ·Secondhand smoke can lead to serious damage to non-smokers. ·Cigarette smoke can stay for a long time in a building, making it hard for people there to breathe.
in great loss. ·Smoking may lead to a fire and bring about great loss. 第三部分：总结全文(避免在公共场合吸烟)。 普通表达 We should avoid smoking in public and create a green environment together. 【范文展示】 普通范文
高级表达 Everyone should control the desire (欲望) to smoke in public for the good of all people's health and our environment. Dear Peter，
I'm pleased to receive your email. I strongly support the government's decision
to ban smoking in public.
Smoking is a bad habit and very harmful to people's health. It makes it easier for smokers to get various diseases. At the same time, secondhand smoke can also badly affect other people's health, especially babies'. Cigarette smoke can pollute the air inside a building and stay there for a long time, which stops people from breathing freely. What's more, smoking may cause a fire and result in great loss.
In a word, we should avoid smoking in public and create a green environment together.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
高级范文
Dear Peter，
I'm pleased to receive your email. As for banning smoking in public, I approve
of the law.
Smoking is a dangerous habit that does harm to not only the smoker, but also those around him or her. It increases the chances of getting deadly diseases. Meanwhile, secondhand smoke can lead to serious damage to non-smokers. Cigarette smoke can stay for a long time in a building, making it hard for people there to breathe. What's worse, smoking may lead to a fire and bring about great loss.
In a nutshell, everyone should control the desire to smoke in public for the good of all people's health and our environment.
Best wishes, Li Hua
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