中考写作评分标准
第四档：（15—13分）第三档：（12—10分）
：
适当使用连词成分。使用简单的连词成分。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。达到了预期的写作目的。
使用简单的连接成分。
基本达到
语言流畅，语句通顺，合乎逻辑。语法结构或词汇应用基本准确。
第二档：（9—6分）漏掉一些信息点。
了预期的写作目的。
第一档：（5—1分）
有些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
描述不清楚，内容不连贯。语法结构或词汇错误影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用连接成分。不能清楚的表达写作目的。
2011
假设你是张林，即将初中毕业，你的美国笔友Bob来信询问你的暑假计划过这个假期。计入总词数。
注意：3.
1.
至少写出你将要做的三件事。
参考词汇：visit;
old
friends
and relatives
,现在请你写一封回信，2.
回信至少不少于
告诉他你将在爷爷奶奶家度80词，信的开头结尾已给出，不
所给英语词汇仅供参考。relax
oneself;
housework;
summer; grandparents;
Hi, Bob,
is
coming year, I
will
soon..
relax
myself.
I
will
spend my vacation
The summer vacation After with
a tiring
school I’ｍgong to stay
with
I
my grandparents.
about we will
I three
take
them for Perhaps trips. will
weeks. Of course, am going to help them do some housework.
some short
to
visit
some of
my friends
I
will
and relatives. be a senior How will
I
think
in wea
Besides, am going
have a happy time
so I
together.
to
What’ｓmore , student
new term , holiday Best Yours,
wishes.
am going make some preparations. you spend your
Zhang Lin
2012
假设你是赵铭．你班来自美国的交流学生情；连贯；
Robert患病住院已有三周．请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件．主要内容包括：询问病
注意：
1．词数80一100词左右；
2．可以适当增加细节．以使行文
介绍班级近期活动或学习情况；表达祝愿。
3．信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
It’s three weeks since you were ill. How are you feeling now We all miss we have had many activities.
you very much. Recently
prize.
We took part in the sports meeting in our school and won the first
The matches were exciting and tough. But we tried our best and got the good result. What a pity! You didn’t watch them. I hope you
’ll get well soon and come back earlier. We
’re busy preparing for
the singing competition now. We practice a song every day in order to sing best. Remember to have a good rest and donBest wishes.
’t worry about your lessons. I
’ll help you with them.
Yours ,Zhao Ming
2013
假设你是周浩，你遗失了你的英国籍好友
Frank借给你的一本书，请根据以下提示用英语给他写一封信表示道歉，包括以下内
容：1. 怎么遗失的；2. 对该书的评价；3. 如何补救；4. 你的教训。注意：1. 词数80 —100词左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Frank，
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the book you were so kind to lend me last week. I like the hook very much and I read it every day and plan to finish it next month. Last night when I came to my room, it wasn
’t found anywhere. I will get a new book for you.
are lost
，they can never be replaced. I
feel sorry for
Old books are like old friends. Once they
losing the book. I was so careless with my things. This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future. Best wishes. Yours truly, Zhou Mao
2014
良好的生活与学习习惯对我们的成长是非常重要的。请从以下的习惯中选择一个你以前做得不够好，但现在已具备的好习惯，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程及收益。80词左右；
要求：1）不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息； 2）内容完整，书写整齐； 3）
4）文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
My good habitMy good habit ade 7 student, k, I
I
lay to of
in
is I
early liked
to
bed and early
books in
to
rise．Two years
day after
ago, I
when I
was a Grmy homewor
reading 24:00
bed．Every finished
bed until
for
o’clock．The next
I
felt I
tired
day I in
couldn’ｔget up on time. bad．With
the
used help
be late my teacher
bad
school ,and class．It was too
and my parents,
then,
I
gave up the school
late
since go to bed early and get up early .I never go to
again．As a result ,
and doing
better
in
school
now．
I’ｍmuch stronger
2015
假如你是某中学的学生会主席王东括：
1.
,为了配合环保教育主题活动
2条）；3.
2.
你的希望。
,请根据下面所给提示
注意：
1.
,用英语写一封倡议书，内容包注意文章的整体连贯；
2.
文章
环保措施和美化城市的措施（各
的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；80词左右。
Dear friends, In
order
to
make the
environment
more beautiful,
we should
Dear friends, In otect utiful.
order it.
to First, Also,
make the
environment
plant
more beautiful, more trees to is
throw
we should
to
do what make our waste
water
necessa
we can to city
pr
we should and flowers rubbish
or
more bea
always remember not know,
water
pour
everywhere. ry the alk
In will
to tap
As we all
For
becoming less and less. So it?s quite
save water. off
after
out
example,
Last, of
turn but
not
the
least,
we?d better
ride
a bike
or
w
washing. instead
when going my opinion,
driving tries
his
a car.best
to
protect
the
environment,
our
city
if everyone
become nicer and cleaner!
Thank you. Wang Dong
2016
初中生活中，你有些什么改变你是怎样改变的请以“作内容包括：兴趣爱好、行为习惯、学习习惯等方面。语言流畅书写规范，卷面整洁。
How I
have changed”为题写一篇英语小短文，描述你发生的变化，写
80词左右。
2. 任选两方面内容。
3.
要求：1. 用英语写一篇短文，
4. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名校名。
How I
How time these
flies,
Three
years
have changed
passed,
and I
have changed a lot
during
has quickly
days.
I
wasn't
good at
learning me how
English to
at
first,
When my English
and to
read
teacherat
ma
On one hand, learned
about
is
that, she taught memorize new words,
progress
ny passages interested On the teachers whenever
in
as possible, English. hand,
I
soon I made great and became
other was too
I
weak to do my exercise, but with the help of the
and classmates, I
am free, like the
I
do exercise
can run
very
fast
and I
’am
also
good at
playin
and now I
boys.school
g basketball Thanks to
other middle
life ,I have changed so much !Thanks to the teachers
and classmates, Never will
I
have learned
the
so much !
middle
school
life !
forget valuable
必背范文选篇
感想 / 学习篇
( 一 )
为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，
《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以
How to be a good learner
为题的征文比赛活动，
请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。
【How to be a good learner】
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. Itgood to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better
ask others for help. As a student,
working hard is important,
but don’t
’s
forget to do sports and keep healthy.
I think all these above will be helpful to us.
( 二 ) 亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“会。
My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟; 2.词数80左右。
【My English Study】
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to
understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted
to the teacher carefully
to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened
in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
情感 / 生活篇
( 一 ) 父亲节马上就要到了，
但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。
请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展，
并向同学们提出一些建
议。80词左右，开头和结尾以给出
(不计入总词数)。提示：1.如果有足够的零花钱，可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西，如领
(do something that you can do)
，如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。
带等；2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情
【Father’s Day】
Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, your father will like it. But if you don
like a tie.
I think
’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you
can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important you think so
thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t
( 二 ) 今天是母亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友要点如下：1. 表述你与母亲间的情感；2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。
2. 为母亲制作一张卡片；3. 帮助母亲做点事；4. 陪母亲散步等。注意：1.词数80左右；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
It’s Mother’s Day today. It
’s a special day, isn
’t it
I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.
Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook
her favouri
te food in the
evening. Besides,
I’ll take
a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy.
What’s your plan for MotherYours,Li Hua
’s Day I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
( 三 ) 某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。要点：
How to keep a good relationship with parents
1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；
的征文活动。请
2.你对这些
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