2020届高考英语书面表达“内容概要”高三模拟练习（四）
写作指导与解读 一、概写原题 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
There's a big difference between working hard and being a workaholic. Working hard involves being organized, focused, getting a lot of work done, knowing when to stop, and having a life other than work. Workaholics, on the other hand, live entirely for work. They are often disorganized, always find reasons for working more, don't know how or when to relax, and can't communicate with family members.
Workaholics, like those who are constantly drunk, suffer from a controlling habit, partly because they are always full of enthusiasm for work, feeling lost without work to do. Besides, they sometimes develop their pattern of behavior due to the environment they are in. Many companies encourage work a holism by rewarding loyal employees with higher pay and better benefits. Those unwilling to burn the midnight oil are at risk.
According to some psychologists, work a holism can be good for people to some extent. It can fuel a sense of self-worth and achievement. They get paid for it and praised for it, which produces good feelings they may not necessarily be able to obtain in other parts of their lives. Work a holism, though, is a problem that has been around for years. With competition rising these days, people are under more stress. However, workaholics can't stand not being active. They find it hard to go on vacation. They're more comfortable being with fellow workers than with family and friends. Of course there is nothing wrong with their commitment, ambition and energy. But what is wrong
is that these things often come in at a high price to their health and the happiness of their families.
To be a healthy person physically and psychologically, one should lead a balanced life. Those little things—reading mystery novels, playing volleyball, spending time with family and friends, playing with the dog, going fishing—means a healthy end. They can be at least as rewarding as work.
二、概写步骤 第一步：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，理清各段落之间的逻辑关系，提取全文中心词，尤其是名词与动词。
第二步：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动词与名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点。
第三步：根据所划内容，结合理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然后转述或合成句子。可用中文概括出段落大意，然后用一句话翻译出来(合理利用原词)。
第四步：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的替换、句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等。
第五步：用衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
三、分段概括 关键词句已在原文标出，结合理解，用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。
?努力工作和工作狂在许多方面有很大的不同，包括工作条理、休闲与交流沟通。 Working hard and being a workaholic differ considerably in various aspects, including relaxation, organization, and communication.
?尽管有消极的结果，工作狂的习惯还是不可避免地受到心理和环境的影响。
Despite negative consequences, a workaholic's habit is inevitably influenced by psychology and environment.
?然而，心理学家认为，痴迷工作增强了人们的自我价值感和成就感，使他们感觉
良好，但它往往会损害他们的健康和幸福。
However, psychologists assume that workaholism strengthens people's sense of self-worth and achievement, making them feel good, but it often costs them health and well-being.
?因此，身心健康的关键是工作和生活之间的平衡，这可以通过做一些生活小事来
实现。
Therefore, the key to physical and mental health is a balance between work and life, which can be achieved by doing small things in life.
四、下水范文 Working hard and being a workaholic differ considerably in various aspects, including relaxation, organization, and communication. (要点1)Despite negative consequences, a workaholic's habit is inevitably influenced by psychology and environment. (要点2)However, Psychologists assume that workaholism strengthens people's sense of self-worth and achievement, making them feel good, but it often costs them health and well-being. (要点3)Therefore, the key to physical and mental health is a balance between work and life, which can be achieved by doing small things in life.(要点4)【77字】
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2020届高考英语书面表达“内容概要”高三模拟练习(四)写作指导和解读(含范文)
