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2020年全国新高考试题及经典模拟题分类汇编之应用文

2020年全国新高考试题

【2020·浙江卷】假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1. 询问近况;2. 分享班级最新消息;3. 表达祝愿。 注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文1】Dear Peter,

I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?

I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.

We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文2】 Dear Peter,

Hearing the news that you’re ill and you have returned to Ireland, I feel very sorry. I’m wondering whether you have recovered from your sickness. Therefore, I am writing to you to show my concern for your health.

Through your tireless work, all of us have achieved much progress in English study, especially in speaking. What’s more, with the approaching of Gaokao, we are making full preparations for it. I believe in the near future, you will get our good news and we will live up to you expectations.

We do sincerely hope that you will gain health soon and we are also expecting your early return to China.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况,分享消息和表达祝愿。 第一步:审题

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体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。

结构:三段式结构。第一段询问近况;第二段告知班级消息;第三段表达祝愿。 要求:1.询问近况(How are you feeling now?)

2.告知班级消息(my good news; performed a song which you taught us) 3.表达祝愿(wish you a quick and complete recovery) 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery 第三步:连词成句

1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. 2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. 3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. 4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery. 根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 第五步:润色修改 【点睛】

范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。 1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:

I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.( 听说你请病假回家了,我很难过。)这句话运用了that 引导宾语从句。

Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival.(上个月,我们学校举办了英语节,我们班在节上表演了一首您教我们的歌曲。)这句话运用了which引导限制性定语从句。

As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.(我们一唱完这首歌,所有的观众都给了我们热烈的掌声。)这句话中as soon as引导时间状语从句。

2.使用了一些固定词组,如be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause等。 全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

【2020·全国新高考II山东卷】假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写

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一篇报道, 内容包括: 1. 参加人员:

2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下: 3. 活动反响。 注意:

1. 写作词数应为80左右:

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

A Cross-Country Running Race 【参考范文1】

A Cross-Country Running Race

Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.

The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.

The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive. 【参考范文2】

Last Sunday witnessed a Cross-country Running Race held by our school. Joining in it were teachers and students from different grades, all of whom made it to the destination successfully despite the scorching heat and the rugged road. The whole journey covered five miles from the school gate to the foot of the south mountain . Surprisingly, exercise routine as it was, the race received an immediate and warm welcome in that it not only strengthened one’s health but also was a great test of his stamina. 【参考范文3】

A Cross-Country Running Race

A Cross-Country 5000-metre race, part of the Sports Festival of our school, was held by the school students’

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union last Sunday. 150 participants from three grades were involved in the race. Among the most of the participants were students and teaching staff. The racing route started at the school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill. It turned out to be a great success. Not only does it build up our body but it also enriches our school life. 【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。 体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应以一般过去时为主 结构:总分总 要求: 1. 参加人员 2. 跑步路线 3. 活动反响

第二步:列提纲(重点词组)

attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth./ measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb. 第三步:连词成句

1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every

student and teacher of our school.

2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.

3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.

4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help

as well as encouragement.

5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.

6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us

more cohesive.

第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句) 表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although… 定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where… 第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)

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【点睛】

范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分举行,例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 中which引导非限制性定语从句;The activity is highly thought of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more cohesive.中使用了部分倒装。

【2020·天津卷】假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍关情况,内容包括: (1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像); (2)对活动的感受; (3)对自己未来的展望。 注意:

(1)词数不少于100;

(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行方连贯; (3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:

成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony 新冠脑炎 COVID-F9 Dear Chris,

I’m so glad to hear from you.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours, Li Jin

【答案】Dear Chris,

I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.

Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor

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专题12 全国新高考及地方卷试题书面表达---应用文(解析版)

2020年全国新高考试题及经典模拟题分类汇编之应用文2020年全国新高考试题【2020·浙江卷】假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.询问近况;2.分享班级最新消息;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。____________________
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