改为：Itwasquiteanexperienceforusboth,whichI’llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.
◆分词结构
①Idon’tknowaboutothers,butIusedtohavetoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.
②We’llmostlystayathomeintheeveningwatchingTV,playinggames,andmeetingpeople.
③Hearingthis,afewpeoplebegantorunafterhim.
④BorninAmerica,ThomasEdisonwasagreatscientistandinventor.
◆with结构
第11页共17页①Aterribleaccidenthappenedyesterday,withninepeoplekilledandalmosteightyinjured.
②Hewascarryingalargebagonhisshoulder,withalargesuitcaseinhislefthand.
◆倒装句
①Thelibraryistotheeastoftheteachingbuilding.改为：Eastoftheteachingbuildingisthelibrary.
②Althoughwearetired,wearehappy.改为：Tiredasweare,wearehappy.
③Hecangrowtobeausefulmanonlyinthisway.改为：Onlyinthiswaycanhegrowtobeausefulman.
第12页共17页◆被动语态
①Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.
②Allclassesaretaughtbyteacherswithrichexperienceinteachingforeignstudents.
③Newfactories,housesandroadshavebeenbuilt.
◆巧妙的改写
①Only等于noonebut
OnlyTompassedtheexamlastweek.改为：NoonebutTompassedtheexam.
②assoonas…可用Nosooner…than…/Hardly…when…代替
第13页共17页Assoonaswehadarrivedatthecinema,thefilmstarted改为：Nosoonerhadwearrivedatthecinemathanthefilmstarted.
③havesb/sth/done
Thegirlwasknockedoffherbicycleandbrokeherleg.改为：Thegirlwasknockedoffherbicycleandhadherlegbroken
④变换插入语的位置
However,theysuggestfeesshouldbechargedlow.改为：Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.
Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyoursingingtalent,andhowwellyou’velearnedChinese.
第14页共17页改为：Thisisagoodchanceforyou,Ithink,toshowyoursingingtalent,andhowwellyou’velearnedChinese.
⑤用同位语代替非限制性定语从句
Meimei,whoissevenyearsold,hasbeenlearningtorideabicycleforseveraldays.
改为：Meimei,agirlofseven,hasbeenlearningtorideabicycleforseveraldays.
◆其他
1.注重句子的开头
①用with复合结构开头
Withthesunsettinginthewest,wehadtowavegoodbyetotheworkers.
Withhishelp,we’velearnedhowtoanalyzeandsettleproblems.
第15页共17页
高中英语瞬间提升作文格调,必备“高级词汇 高级句型”
