(通用版)2017届高三英语二轮复习 第1部分 专题5 短文改错 训练4 短文改错(Ⅳ)

训练4 短文改错(Ⅳ)

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(2016·太原二模)

My flat is on the fifth floor of a high－rise building where is opposite a busy road.During the day we can hear the traffic passed outside, which can be quite disturbing.Fortunately, there was a park just outside our building, so we have a pleasant view of grass and trees from our living room with two window.I often walk away through the park to get to the bus stop on the other's side.I go to work by bus every day.Wait for the bus takes me some time.The town centre is quite near to my flat, so it's convenience for both shopping and entertainment.It's really a good place to live.Warmly welcome to your neighbourhood.

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B

(2016·石家庄质检)

I've learnt from the notice that you're looking for an English editor for us school paper.I'm written this letter to apply for the position.

I'm Li Hua, Senior Three student in our school.In my view, I met your requirements: for one thing, I'm willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others; for another, I'm good at both English or Fine Arts.I'm either skilled in using computers.I would be glad if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

I'm looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient. 【答案】

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【导学号：90892097】

C

(2016·湖北七市联考) Dear Jane，

How's everything going? I'm glad to have met you and become friend with you.I miss you very well and thus I'm writing to tell you anything about my new life at college.

My new school is so beautiful as a huge garden.There are green grass and colorful flowers everywhere.My teachers are all kind and I believe, with time go by, I'll make a great progress.My classmates are very friendly and I made many new friends here.I feel that my new life is very excited, but I also realize that it is full of challenges.I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a brightly future.Of course, I'll also do more exercise to keep fit.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely，

Tom

【答案】 Dear Jane，

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I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely，

Tom

D

(2016·成都二模)

Last Friday, I was standing near a subway exit, tried to call a taxi.But no luck.Then I thought of the taxi－booking app my friend has recommended and I booked a taxi through my cellphone.Soon it came, and I stepped in, feeling pretty proudly of my high－tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought by the app.So later, I was upset to find that the driver was busy looking his cellphone to get the next order.It was just then when I began to worry about my safety. What's bad, the driver's informations might be unreliable. How can we passengers' legal rights be protecting if something bad happens? So be careful when you use the taxi－booking app the next time.

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