专题20 书面表达(应用文)——高效演练
1.假设你叫李华，现在英国曼彻斯特大学留学，受到邀请，你准备参加“东方文化俱乐部”举办的用英语讲故事活动，让世界了解中国文化。你故事的内容是“凿壁偷光”。内容包括: 1. 概述故事的含义; 2. 谈谈个人感想. 注意:
1. 可适当发挥，使文章内容充实，行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇:凿壁:make a hole in the wall
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There is always a picture in my mind. A boy, who is in worn clothes, sat at a wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.
This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he made a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor’s house to read at night. The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be. Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future. 【解析】
本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写“凿壁偷光”的故事。
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一个故事：假设你叫李华，现在英国曼彻斯特大学留学，受到邀请，你准备参加“东方文化俱乐部”举办的用英语讲故事活动，让世界了解中国文化。你故事的内容是“凿壁偷光”。内容包括:1. 概述故事的含义;2. 谈谈个人感想。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；make a hole in the wall（凿壁），well-known（众所周知的），idiom（成语），afford（买得起），candle（蜡烛），steal（偷），discouraged（气馁的），moral（寓意）及reflect
（反映）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有a ray of （一束），come in（进来），be absorbed in (全神贯注于)，spare no effort to（不遗余力）， get discouraged（气馁），pay off (有回报)，take pains to（尽力），get prepared for（为……做好准备），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“A boy, who is in worn clothes, sat at a wooden table with a pile of books on it.”，状语从句“spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.”，强调句型“It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.”，非谓语动词“The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he made a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor’s house to read at night.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
2.假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。下个月学校将到所在社区开展“美化家园”和“社区讲堂”两次志愿者活动。你班交换生Jim打算参加其中的一项活动，发来邮件咨询。请你给Jim回复一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐一项活动； 2. 简述可做的事情； 3. 表达愿望。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim,
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Yours, Li Hua
【参考范文】Possible version 1:
Dear Jim,
I’m glad you’re interested in the voluntary activity next month. I suggest you take part in the activity of beautifying our community.
You can help to pick up garbage and clean up small advertisements together with our schoolmates, which will make the community cleaner and tidier. You can also help to grow plants and flowers to beautify the community environment. With our efforts the appearance of the community will be greatly improved and it’ll take on a new look.
Through the activity you’ll contribute to our community and I’m sure you’ll have a sense of belonging as a community member. I hope you’ll have a pleasant experience.
Yours, Li Hua
Possible version 2: Dear Jim,
I’m glad you’re interested in the voluntary activity next month. I advise you to be a volunteer of the community lecture room.
You can teach the community residents some daily spoken English and talk about the differences between western and Chinese cultures, which will develop their knowledge and broaden their horizons. You can also introduce some popular APPs, such as Booking, to make their life more convenient.
I’m sure you’ll be able to fully integrate into the community life through the activity and have a sense of belonging as a community member. I hope you’ll have a pleasant experience.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。
第一步：根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①学校将到所在社区开展“美化家园”和“社区讲堂”两次志愿者活动；②推荐一项活动：“美化家园”或者“社区讲堂”；③简述可做的事情；④表达愿望。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：voluntary activity（志愿者活动），beautifying our community（美化社区），community lecture room（社区讲堂），clean up small advertisements（清理小广告），spoken English（英语口语）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
【点睛】两篇范文从不同的活动展开来写，结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。
非限制性定语从句的使用You can help to pick up garbage and clean up small advertisements together with our schoolmates, which will make the community cleaner and tidier.以及You can teach the community residents some daily spoken English and talk about the differences between western and Chinese cultures, which will develop their knowledge and broaden their horizons.
宾语从句的使用I suggest you take part in the activity of beautifying our community. 3.你班英语课上以“I Have A Dream”为题进行“说”的练习，请你写一份讲稿，内容包括： 1．你的梦想是什么； 2．你为何有此梦想； 3．你如何实现梦想。 注意：
1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everybody! __________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
Thank you. 【参考范文】
Hello, everybody! I’m very glad to share my dream with you.
I have a dream that one day I could be a pianist. I dream of playing a sweet tune for those who need music, bringing happiness to sorrowful souls and enthusiasm to weary spirits.
I love music, and I love the feeling of playing music in front of the audience. Of all the instruments, the delicate yet powerful sound a piano makes impresses me most.
It’s clear that I have a long way to go before I realize my dream. Therefore, I will practice every day as long as time permits and learn as many songs as I can. I will put my heart into my pursuit of music and never give up.
I am confident that one day my dream will come true. Thank you. 【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。文章应分三个层次写：第一：表明自己的梦想；第二：阐述该梦想的原因；第三：写出实现该梦想的措施。文章内容比较贴近学生生活，属于比较简单的一篇文章。本文应以现在时态为主。应用第一人称。
【亮点说明】该文条理清楚，语言简洁，内容齐全，非常适合演讲稿的特点。长短句结合，适当运用了高1. 同位语从句：I have a dream that one day I could be a pianist. 2. 定语从句：I dream of playing 级词汇和句式：
a sweet tune for those who need music. 3. 主语从句：It’s clear that… 4. 高级词汇：pursuit，in front of the audience，as long as time permits
4.假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Simon一真想成为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者。最近，2022年北京奥组委向全球招募志愿者，请你给Simon写一封邮件，要点如下： 1. 对志愿者的相关要求；
2. 你可以为Simon提供的帮助（如：接站、住宿等）。 注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：招募recruit北京奥组委BOOC (Beijing Olympic Organizing Committee) Dear Simon,
Good news for you.
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Yours,
2020年领军高考英语必考点全梳理专题20-书面表达（高效演练）
