Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to do，be interested in，ecological citizen，give a speech，how to do，take a bus，ride a bike，instead of，cut down，go shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better等。而I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
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VII . 书面表达
58.现在越来越多的学生使用“作业帮”这个APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此，不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下文字的提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。
1.及时帮助学生解决在学习中遇到的困难； 2.在家就能学习，简单，方便； 优点 3.可以选择自己喜欢的老师，学习兴趣更浓。 1.有的学生假装学习，事实上在玩游戏； 2.有的学生不想独立思考，直接照抄答案，他们根本不关心自己的学缺点 习，只是虚度光阴。 你的建议 要求：
1. 80－100 词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内）
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则，不予评分。 参考词汇：convenient 方便的，便利的 pretend to do… 假装做… think independently 独立思考
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联系实际，给出自己合理的建议。 Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people
think___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. Some people think it’s useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. It’s easy and convenient for them.
They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. However, others don’t think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They don’t want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don’t care about their studying at all. It’s a waste of time.
I think it’s good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who don’t want to study, it’s very bad. 【解析】
这篇作文要求我们对介绍不同人对“作业帮”这个应用软件的看法，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。题目中利用表格的形式，列出了写作的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括以下几个部分：作业帮的优点、缺点以及个人观点。可以分为三段分别进行叙述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈现，学生们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。最后一部分内容则需要学生们联系自己的实际生活，发挥想象力，自己来补充适当的内容。文章应以一般现在时、第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中，不能遗漏要点。可以根据表达需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实、完整，但需要注意合理性，要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译表格内容，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。这是一篇优秀是作文，短文作者根据题目要求，把人们对“作业帮”这个应用软件的不同看法进行了介绍，并在最后
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发表了自己的观点。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容之间层次清晰，叙述有条理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。句子结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。除简单句结构外，短文里还使用了and连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，以及动词不定式、动名词等非谓语动词结构。短文中较好的句型有The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、I think it’s good for students who are hard-working等等。
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第三节 书面表达
57.为弘扬中华传统文化，你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华，请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友John。 要点：
1. 时间：5月16日下午2:30; 2. 地点：学校操场;
3. 内容：校长在开幕式上致辞；戏曲知识竞赛；师生戏曲表演等； 4. 感受：对传统文化有了进一步的了解…… 要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名； 2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
4. 词数：80—100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：戏曲 opera (n.) 开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.) 表演 performance ( n.)致辞 make a speech Dear John,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
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Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear John，
How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera. Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own. Best wishes!
Yours Li Hua
【解析】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be hold，on the playground，in the beginning，make a speech，at the opening ceremony，after that，in the end，put on，have a chance等。而we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera./ Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. /I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
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八、书面表达
61.随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下提示，以“Great changes around me”为题，写一篇短文。 写作要点：
1. 过去, 道路狭窄(narrow), 房展老旧, 空气…河水…
2.现在。路面洁净、宽阔, 交通便利；高楼林立；蓝天白云, 满城绿树鲜花, 小鸟歌唱；人们… 3.感受, … 写作要求：
1.要点齐全, 省略号处须作适当发挥, 但不要逐句翻译； 2. 语句连贯, 条理清晰, 详略得当, 书写工整； 3文中不得出现任何宾实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）； 4.100词左右, 短文的翅目和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were old and small. The air wasn't fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It's really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built in the city. Most of us have moved to big beautiful houses. The sky is blue and the cloud is white .The
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孝感
birds are singing happily. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.
Our country is rich and strong, we are living a happy life. I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better! 【解析】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如take place，around me，used to be，convenient for，go out，different kinds of，lots of，most of us，look like，live a happy life，go on，become better and better等。而固定句型It's really convenient for people to go out.和固定句型The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.以及I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
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湖北省2020年中考英语真题分类汇编专题08书面表达含解析
