2020年高考英语精选考点专项突破27书面表达（提纲类）.pdf

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1.从以上两种做法中选择一种；2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。

注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。

When I Have a Different Opinion

【参考答案】

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it . By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day . Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

An alternative student version:

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism; I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more. 【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达陈述观点及理由。

写作时注意以下几点：

1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确从以上两种做法中选择一种，是坚持自己的观点并说服别人还是遵从大多数同学的意见。

2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。

3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。但是在以具体事例阐述的时候使用过去时

4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如运用连词while 表对比观点。运用运用了表语从句表达原因运用了宾语从句运用了介词短语运用了强调句

because 表达原因。

。

…

not only

…but also不仅而且。…

The main reason for my choice is that

decide whether do have a ；…　discuss where to go for an outing

By doing so, Without hesitation. we did have a lots of fun that day.

be worth doing sth;

stick to sth.; have a good time; have lots of fun ,

此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如

tend to do 等。

【考点定位】考查观点理由。【名师点睛】

一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾。22.【2015·重庆】写作一（满分

15分）

请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。

If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say? 要求：

（1）作出回答并说出理由；（2）词数不少于

60；

（3）在答题卡上做答。【参考答案】

Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific

goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals. 【解析】

试题分析：本文属于考查开放性作文写作，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，使用了多种句式和结构。比如

I would strongly recommend that I set

more practical and specific goals.宾语从句；Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward.这个句子还运用到非谓语动词；could go back and reset my goals.还运用到虚拟语气。【考点定位】考查开放性作文。

【名师点睛】这种开放性的作文，采取表明观点虑从虚拟语气着手1. 宾语从句I suggest/ advise that2. 主语从句

It’s strongly recommended that3. 条件状语从句

If I were three years younger, I would

二、原因句式：建议陈述两个原因，用并列结构1. The reason why2. Why I say so is that三、结尾部分：表达对

… is that

…

“回不到过去”的惋惜

…

not only, but

…as well连接

…

…I should