We can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries. 【解析】
试题分析：对于基础写作用
5个句子概括医疗新技术，要求必须用上所有的要点，不能遗漏。对于概括短
1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。
2.根据要
文大意，要抓住要点。叙述自己的班级情况时：
表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态及一般将来时。和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。hard is very important运用了宾语从句，以及语从句。副词
3.注意使用高级词汇
比如I will explain to them that studying
定
Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.
Therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。
【考点定位】考查提纲作文。【名师点睛】本题所给用悉的句式来写，还必须用
5个句子概括医疗新技术的材料是学生不太熟悉的内容，所以要尽量使用学生熟5个句子表达所有的信息。此题主要考查阅读概括能力及语言的组织的能力。需
要用一些高级句式及词汇来增加文章的亮点。14.【2015·陕西】书面表达（满分
30分）
“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要
假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers
Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at
chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点：
1.表示写信意图；2.陈述应征目的；
3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）写作要求：
。
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1.邮件词数不少于100；
2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear MS Chen , I’m
Li
Hua,
a
student
from
Class2,
Grade
3.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly, Li Hua
【参考答案】Dear MS Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I
’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly, Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，件。写作时注意以下几点：
根据提示可知需要结合
“英语文化节”的一则招募启事写一封应征邮
2、根据写作要点从三
1、仔细阅读招募启事，弄清招募职位所有信息和要求；
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个方面写应征邮件。写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。本文而言应该用一般现在时态。
3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就
4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
I have such a good command of
I have lent a
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
运用了so…that句型，以及定语从句…
helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如
apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well
等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully
with,,have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。【考点定位】考查提纲作文
【名师点睛】这篇作文类似于读写类作文。首先要读懂招募启事，抓住重要信息。再结合提纲写作。内容贴近学生的生活，学生有话讲。也富有实用性。对学生的交际能力也会有所帮助。15.【2015·四川】书面表达（共
35分)
Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（
Mandarin）水平，
假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生
她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；Hi Sharon,
This
is
Li
Xia.
I
learned
from
your
post
that
you
want
to
improve
your
Mandarm__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】
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Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think I
’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which
means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So Ihelp you learn Mandarin.
’m quite confident
Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.
In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I
So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.
Hope for you early reply!
Yours Sincerely
Li Xia
【解析】
试题分析：考查提纲类作文。提纲作文在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次，考生要能够抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲。
写作文时，一定要切题，抓
’m eager to im
住中心，紧扣要点。然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，考生应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。本篇文章的要点具体，可分成三段写，第一段写要点回信。
【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，
结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：
I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is
1、2；第二段写要点
3；第三段写要点
4，以及希望得到对方的
a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.短语等。
【考点定位】考查提纲类作文
、表语从句：It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量
【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。16.【2015·天津】
. 动笔
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书面表达（满分25分）
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长
（1）自我介绍；
（2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；（3）询问对方的其他需求。注意：
（1）词数不少于
100；
Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。
（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇：Dear Chris,
此处不能答题
学生会the Student Union
Yours, Li Jin
【参考答案】
Dear_Chris，I am Li Jin, donation.
In order to enhance the friendship between our two schools, our school has appealed to the students to donate books to your Chinese class. The books, which can be used as reading materials or reference books in your Chinese class, include 30 storybooks, 25 magazines and 20 Chinese-English dictionaries. We will take the books over to you when we take part in the summer camp to be held in your school in July.
Should you need any other things, please do not hesitate to tell us. Yours，Li_Jin 【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：图书的类型、册数、用途等；
3. 询问对方的其他需求；
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chairman of the Student Union of Chenguang High School. I am writing to inform you of our
1.自我介绍及写信目的；2.拟捐赠
4．告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带
2020年高考英语精选考点专项突破27书面表达（提纲类）.pdf
