符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to
If you want to join....；等。
participate.时间状语从句.... theme the last time you visited our school.条件状语从句全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。考点：考查半开放作文
5.【2016·全国新课标III】书面表达（满分
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Bob,
25分）
Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
I’ｍ sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I
have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we
books. If it
’s convenient for you, let
’ll have more time to read and select
’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits yo
best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】
试题分析：题目要求写一封道歉信，就不能如约一起去书向
Bob道歉，使用第一人称和一般现在时进行
写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句important class meeting that afternoon
that I have to attend an
so that
和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句
we’ll have more time to read and select books；条件句If it使内容更加丰富。考点：书信类作文【名师点睛】
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’s convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，
题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。6. 【2016·北京】书面表达（共两节，第一节（15分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给
1. 该人物是谁；2. 该人物的主要贡献；3. 该人物对你的影响。注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Cheers!
Yours, Li Hua 【解析】
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35 分）
Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并
Jim回信，内容包括：
试题分析：题材新颖，要求介绍中国历史人物，内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的影响。不少于50词，使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。亮点说明：范文使用了词组文注意上下文的语意连贯。考点：应用文写作【名师点睛】
题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。7.【2016·天津】书面表达（满分
25分）hear from,
As for, In fact和搭配inspire sb to do sth等，丰富了作文内容；范
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。（1）（2）（3）注意：（1）（2）（3）
词数不少于100；
可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）谈谈收获或感情；表达祝愿语期望。
；
Dear friends, How time flies!
Thank you. 【答案】
One possible version: Dear__friends,__
How__time__flies! Two weeks went by before we realized that our exchange activities ended. On behalf of our school, I would like to express my feelings.
As scheduled, we took part in several instructive activities. We have learnt many Chinese characters and often took exercise together. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was extremely
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delicious and different from our food. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists' works.
As far as I'm concerned, everyone here is a member of our big family. And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip to your country. I hope we'll get together again next year.
Thank__you.
【解析】这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【考点定位】考查提纲作文
【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点，适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用，尽量使用简洁的语言。8.【2016·四川】书面表达（满分某中学生英文报正举办1. 你最喜欢的季节；
2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受注意：
1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好；3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。
……）。
25分）
“The Season I Like Best的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：”
【参考范文】
One possible version:
Among the four seasons in a year, summer is my favourite, which makes me free, excited and energetic. When summer vacation for us students comes every year, we can do all that we can't do during our school time, going shopping with friends, swimming in warm water and even hiking and camping in the deep valleys, all of which, I think, lead me to full freedom. We can find us in an exciting world every day, with the sun shining brightly, trees growing greenly and flowers coming out with all kinds of colours. Summer makes me full of energy and I feel I have the strength to do the most difficult things in my life. I like summer best, and what about you
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？
【解析】这是一篇英文报的征文，要求描写考生最喜欢的季节，话题贴近考生实际生活，令考生有话
1. 写作要点：文章主要包含两大要点，首先点出自己最喜欢的是哪一个季节；
可说。考生成文时应注意：
然后陈述自己喜欢该季节的两条理由；这两条理由可以从气候、景色、活动、感受等之中进行选择性的描写。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；
3. 人称：第一人称；
4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。
5.
适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。9.【2016·浙江】书面表达（满分
30分）
100-120词的短文。
“Planning is good ,but doing is better是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇”要求如下：
1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。
注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）
：
2.文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。
Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
【答案】One possible student version
Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined. 【解析】
试题分析：本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目判断作文主要介绍要将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能走题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：个具体事例加以说明；
1.简述你对这句名言的理解；
2.用一
3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意
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2020年高考英语精选考点专项突破27书面表达（提纲类）.pdf
