专题27 书面表达（提纲类）
1.【2018·天津卷】书面表达（满分
25分）
Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他普在机器人7月底在天津举行的世界青少学机器人技能竞%网
假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。学科（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；
（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：（1）词数不少于
100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Jin
【参考范文1】Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July so as to promote the development of robotics.
What I would like to stress is that it is looking for new members at this moment. I would like to invite you to take part in it, since I know you've just won first prize in the Robotics competition held in your institute and have shown great talent in designing robotics. Therefore, you are the most suitable person, I suppose.
the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
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The training schedule, in addition to regular training, includes joining in a variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions. I will send its details to you by e-mail. I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perfect.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Jin
【参考范文2】Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award
, I, on behalf of the
Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.
With this email I also send you our training plan,
about which I wish to get your advice because you are
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more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Jin
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封电子邮件。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，2.介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；
不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请；
Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；
4．告诉
3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括
他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关
系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。2.[2017天津卷·]
假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师
Mrs Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提
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示给她回复一封邮件。
1．简要介绍自己的学习和生活；
2．告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备3．希望她有机会重访天津。注意：
1.词数不少于100；
(如深入了解天津等
)；
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会Dear Mrs Green，
I'm so glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
Yours，Li Jin
【解析】
首先，内容要点要全，三个要点都要包含：
(3)希望她重访天津。
(1)介绍自己的学习和生活；
(2)告诉她你作为第十三届
the 13th National Games
全运会志愿者所做的准备；
其次，要准确并恰当地使用词汇和各种复合句。注意使用定语从句，非谓语动词等表达。在行文过程中要注意时态的正确运用。
第三，要注意上下文的连贯和语言的得体。注意使用一些表示连接和转折的词。最后，要注意一下卷面整洁，书写工整。【答案】
Dear Mrs Green,__
I'm so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. I'm very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well.
I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin. I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again.
Yours，
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Li Jin
3. 【2016·全国新课标I】书面表达（满分
25分）
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历
（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写
信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。【答案】
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don
’t know if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter,
hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor. Looking forward to your reply.
And I’d be really thankful.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
【试题分析】本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。【名师点睛】
本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，
语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。
在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语
In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词
短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is
the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。
4.【2016·全国新课标II】书面表达（满分
25分）
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假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1．主题：环境保护；2．展览时间；
photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封
3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com. 注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Lihua
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友
Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐
1. 校摄影俱乐部举办
部举办的国际中学生摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要对：的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；
2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，
4.投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gm.school.com。在写
也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。
作时，注意书信的格式以及串联过渡用语；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，并在力所能及的范围之内使用复合句或者谚语，增加获得高分的可能性。【名师点睛】
本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，
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2020年高考英语精选考点专项突破27书面表达（提纲类）.pdf
