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(河北省衡水市第二中学2020届高三下学期二模英语试题) 话题:垃圾分类 难度:★★ 建议用时:6分 52.假定你是李华,你校学生会将举办垃圾分类中英文海报设计大赛,你是负责人。请在你校英文网站写一则通知,内容包括: 1. 大赛目的; 2. 作品要求;
3. 作品展出方式及颁奖时间。 注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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Garbage Classification Poster Design Competition
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Student Council
【答案】One possible version:
Notice
Garbage Classification Poster Design Competition
To raise awareness of garbage classification and help students form a good habit, we will hold a competition to design a poster about garbage classification.
The competition is open to anyone. The designs, using both Chinese and English, can be hand-drawn or digitally produced. Submissions can be made as an individual or as a team. Please hand in your work before July 22nd to Mr. Li in Room 102. The designs will be displayed from July 23rd to September 10th in the school hall and on our school website. The award ceremony will be held on September 15th and the awards for winners will be amazing.
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We are looking forward to lots of creative designs.
Student Council
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,要求考生写一则通知,介绍你校学生会将要举办的垃圾分类中英文海报设计大赛。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:三段式:第一段介绍大赛目的,引出主题;第二段介绍作品要求、作品展出方式及颁奖时间;第三段表示期待大家的参与。 要求:1. 介绍大赛目的
2. 介绍作品要求
3. 介绍作品展出方式及颁奖时间 第二步:列提纲 (重点单词及词组)
raise awareness of… (提高……的认识); form a good habit (养成好习惯); garbage classification (垃圾分类); competition (比赛); digitally (数码地); individual (个人); hand in (上交); display (展出); award ceremony (颁奖典礼); look forward to (期待,盼望) 第三步:连词成句
1. We will hold a competition to design a poster about garbage classification. 2. The competition is open to anyone. 3. The designs, usi
ng both Chinese and English, can be hand-drawn or digitally produced.
4. Submissions can be made as an individual or as a team.
5. Please hand in your work before July 22nd to Mr. Li in Room 102.
6. The designs will be displayed from July 23rd to September 10th in the school hall and on our school website. 7. The award ceremony will be held on September 15th and the awards for winners will be amazing. 8. We are looking forward to lots of creative designs.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
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1. 表文章结构顺序:first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last 2. 表并列补充关系:What’s more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and… (本篇文章使用过)
3. 表转折对比关系:but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系:because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why 5. 表总结:in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。 第五步:润色修改
根据写作内容需要,加入高级句式,如名词性从句,定语从句,状语从句等,或合理运用非谓语动词,丰富文章内容:
We will hold a competition to design a poster about garbage classification.本句用来介绍学生会将举办垃圾分类海报设计大赛。可以使用不定式作目的状语,进一步介绍举办比赛的目的。润色修改为:To raise awareness of garbage classification and help students form a good habit, we will hold a competition to design a poster about garbage classification. 【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了非谓语动词,如:To raise awareness of garbage classification and help students form a good habit, we will hold a competition to design a poster about garbage classification.,这句话为不定式在句中作目的状语;其次,使用了一些固定短语,如:raise awareness of… ; form a good habit; look forward to等,使语言更加丰富;同时使用了一些高级词汇,如competition; digitally; individual等,让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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(河北省衡水中学2020压轴卷) 话题:校园友谊 难度:★★ 建议用时:6分 52.假定你是李华,你市将举办留学生汉语演讲比赛,主题为“我眼中的中国”(China in my eyes)。请给在你校留学的Jonah写一封电子邮件。内容包括: 1. 演讲主题; 2. 比赛时间和地点;
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3. 邀请他代表你校参加。 注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jonah,
Knowing that you show interest in Chinese culture,I’m writing to invite you to a Chinese speech contest designed for exchange students in our city.
The contest,whose theme is“China in my eyes”,will be held in the City Library on July 18th,2020. Since you have made great progress in learning Chinese,why not take part in this activity as a representative of our school? I’m sure that you will have a good performance in the contest.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours, Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,邀请留学生参加汉语演讲比赛。 【详解】 第一步:审题 体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求:1.表明写信目的 2.介绍相关情况
1)演讲主题。(theme of the contest)
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2)比赛时间和地点。(time and place of the contest) 3) 邀请他代表你校参加。(invitation) 第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
show interest in; Chinese culture; designed for; made great progress; why not; take part in; representative; be sure that; look forward to 第三步:连词成句
1. Knowing that you show interest in Chinese culture
2. I’m writing to invite you to a Chinese speech contest designed for exchange students in our city. 3. Since you have made great progress in learning Chinese
4. why not take part in this activity as a representative of our school? 5. I’m sure that you will have a good performance in the contest. 6. Looking forward to your early reply!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 第五步:润色修改 【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范The contest,whose theme is“China in my eyes”,will be held in the City Library 文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:on July 18th,2020.这句话运用了whose引导的定语从句;也使用了一些固定词组,如show interest in; take part in; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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(湖北省华师一2020届高考模拟英语试题)
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