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我的妈妈 要点提示 开头:描述我的妈妈 素材串联 1. 妈妈很漂亮(beautiful) 2. 妈妈很善解人意(understanding) 3. 妈妈很乐于助人(helpful) 4. 对我的影响很大(has a great influence) 1. 我考试考得不好(got a bad grade) 2. 她认真地看着试卷(looked at it carefully) 3. 耐心地和我交谈(had a talk with me) 4. 经常帮助我复习功课(helped me review the lesson) 我想告诉妈妈我多么感激她(how thankful I am) 正文:叙述我和妈妈之间发生的一件事 结尾:我想对妈妈说的话 【高分范文】: My Mother
In my opinion, my mother is beautiful, understanding and helpful. She has a great influence on me.
After an exam, I got a bad grade. When I got home, I gave my paper to her. She looked at it carefully. I could see how upset she was. Instead of criticizing me, she had a talk with me patiently. After the talk, I found out the reason. From then on, she often helped me review the lessons. In another exam, I got a good mark.
I want to tell my mother how thankful I am!