【原创精析】2024届高考英语读后续写最新真题剖析+模拟题分析递送 真题部分 ①——2024.7高考浙江卷
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
Para 1:
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.
Para 2:
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.
背景信息
During October and November, the local people both dread and celebrate Polar Bear High Season. This is the time when polar bears migrate to the region and visitors from all over the world follow. It is a GREAT deal of fun especially if you get to view polar bears being airlifted from the Polar Bear Jail. The Churchill Northern Studies Centre, 17 km south of town, serves as base camp for serious arctic research. In town are a number of reasonably comfortable hotels and good shopping opportunities.！
范文1：
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear!
范文2（原创）
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.Shrieks and howls of utter fury broke the silence and extreme terror gripped us.The bear reared up ,attacked the fence and even desired to tear down us with flames blazing in its eyes owing to the dreadful spray. My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled,swallowing hard.In a perspicacious approach to win time from the battle against death,my mind raced and it occurred to me to throw the bread little by little The bear could hardly resist the temptation of the bread,admittedly,avarice urged him to yearn for more.He flew into a rage and hit his chest,glaring at us aggressively.With little hesitation,I fumbled for my camera ,captured the last shot of the bear and smashed it.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.Hope met us!I dashed straight to the camp haltingly, nearly stumbling.If only I could fly!My wife was corresponding with the pilot through radio who ensured whether we had suffered any injury.The fierce noises got on the bear’s nerves and after a glimpse of the enormous thing,the bear disappeared towards the lake. Seeing all of these,we sighed with relief , sparkles of delight arising in our faces.In spite of the glorious sacrifice of my precious camera,the photographs were miraculously survived.What really touched our heartstrings was the encounter,adversity and ceaseless strive.
②——2024.7高考山东卷（精深）
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too. With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.
Para. 1 When Mrs. Meredith heard of the idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and ordered a household popcorn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, together with her three children, paid another visit to the family and told them about the popcorn plan. Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered to Mrs. Meredith’s doorstep. And it wasn’t long before they got the hang of using the machine to make popcorn.
Para. 2 With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Although it was a hard time and things were tight for everybody, Bernard’s business worked out quite well. He carried the popcorn on his small bike, going from door to door to sell it. People were surprised to see such a little, poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors, but eventually almost all of them would buy a bag or two. It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.
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【原创精析】2024届高考英语读后续写最新真题剖析 模拟题分析递送
