九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧讲解及练习题(含答案)

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【答案】Nowadays, lots of students become star chasers. especially many university

students.Some people think teenagers should learn from stars and find their strengths and then they are strict with themselves.When they are sad,it is fun to think stars.Also,they forget the pressure of learning.

However, others think it is a waste of time and energy to chase stars. And it also affects their studies. They can’t face the reality and always dreams of being a famous star.

In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As students, we should learn from them. Only in this way can we become useful persons in the future. 【解析】 【详解】

写作思路：根据所给提示可知，本篇作文可以分三步进行，首先分别列举正反双方的观点，然后摆出自己的看法，并总结作为青少年的我们应该怎么做。列举观点时要思路清晰，具有条理性。

本篇作文，首先以Nowadays, lots of students become star chasers. especially many university students.提出现在普遍存在的现象，接着Some people think….When they are sad, .... Also,…列出一些人赞同的观点及理由，中间用到when以及also 这样的词使表达准确，且具有连贯性。However, others think…用however转折之后接着列出不赞同的观点及理由。

然后In my opinion….巧妙运用过渡语，列出自己的观点; We should….针对我们青少年应该怎么做，给出自己的建议。总结流畅自然，浑然天成。

16．（·北京中考模拟）交流可以化解矛盾,增进友谊。当今交流方式很多，但人们之间的情感似乎越来越淡。

学校英语专栏征文，主题是“Ways of Communication Today”。假如你是李华，你对此很感兴趣，准备投稿，谈谈你日常的交流方式及你的感受。 提示词语： face to face， chatting on line， discuss，appear How many ways do you know to communicate with others? 提示问题：·

How do you usually communicate with your friends? Which is the best way and why?

【答案】There are some ways to communicate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages. My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls.

I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most welcome and useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, communication becomes easier and rapider. With the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place. （118）

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如communicate with others，such as，face to face，body and sign language，chatting on line，have a talk，each other，text messages，talk about，the best way，one of the most welcome and useful inventions，easier and rapider，with the help of，keep in touch with，at any time and in any place等。而My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示的内容逐词翻译并拓展成不同的句子，最后把这些句子连在一起即可。

17．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达

假如你是九年级一班的李新，你们的新外教Peter想去北京参观故宫博物院，希望你能给他作一个大概的介绍。请根据以下要点提示，用英语给他发一封电子邮件。 要点内容：

1.紫禁城（the Forbidden City）的基本情况（又名……； 建于1406-1420；古代皇帝emperor 寝宫；……）

2.游客情况及地位（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宫殿；……） 3.希望他尽快成行。

写作要求：80词左右；条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。 Dear Peter,

I’m Li Xin.____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours, Li Xin

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m Li Xin.I hear you are coming to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum .Let me introduce it to you.It is also called Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well reserved imperial residence in China today.It was built in 1406. It took 14 years to build the Forbidden City. The first ruler who actually lived here was Ming Emperor Zhudi.Many visitors from the world visit it every day. In 1987,the United Nations Educational,Scientific and Cultural Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a World Heritage,the largest ancient palace in the world.We all like it.I think you will also like it.I am looking forward to coming soon. Yours, Li Xin

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一封电子邮件给你的新外教Peter，向他介绍北京故宫博物院。给出的要点比较全面，只要稍加发挥想象即可。写作时注意邮件的格式，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。 要点内容：

1.紫禁城（the Forbidden City）的基本情况（又名……； 建于1406-1420；古代皇帝emperor 寝宫；……）

2.游客情况及地位（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宫殿；……） 3.希望他尽快成行。

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当，所用时态、人称是否符合要求，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。

18．（·全国中考模拟）年春晚节目中相声演员为大家讲述姥姥的故事，展现家风家教的传承，温暖了每一个中国人的心。假如你叫Jack，你所在的小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据下表提示的内容给社区中心写一封英文推荐信向他们推荐你的家庭。 要 点 家庭氛围 邻里关系 绿色生活 推 荐 理 由 相互尊重；彼此关爱；…… 和睦相处；乐于帮助；…… 保护环境；…… 公益活动 志愿援助；…… 要求：

1. 推荐信的内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2. 词数100字左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。 Dear Sir,

I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. 【答案】Dear Sir,

I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress.

In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.

What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful.

Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations.

I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer. Yours Faithfully Jack

【解析】 这是一篇图表，你所在的小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据提示的内容给社区中心写一封英文推荐信向他们推荐你的家庭。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。

would like to do想做某事； respect each other 彼此尊重； get along well with sb与某人相处融洽；volunteer to help people in need.自愿帮助需要的人

19．（·四川中考模拟）（题文）书面表达

课外活动可以让我们增长知识，发展智力，开阔视野和塑造性格。许多学校创造性地开展了课外活动，如朗诵、唱歌、讲故事、演话剧、办刊物以及举办各种体育活动等。 最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目。请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参 加课外活动。 1.你校开展课外活动的情况；

2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；

3.为同学选择课外活动或为学校开设课外活动提出建议。 注意：1.词数 80 以上；

2.文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名； 3.稿件的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。 After-class Activities

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】After-class Activities

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools. In our school there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and improving my skills, they also free me from the heavy work of study.

Here I have some suggestions. To students, we’d better choose the activities which interest us and suit us; Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework.

Dear friends, please actively take part in after-activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve your learning. 【解析】

这篇作文要求写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参 加课外活动。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意如果主语是第三人称单数的时候，谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。