多负面作用。
很多人成了“手机控”。请你根据要求谈谈对自己的看法：
1. 手机的正面作用；2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。 【答案】 Phones can help us communicate more easily and know about what's happening around the world. Today many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. Depending on mobile phones too much is bad for health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and harmful to study. I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends. They should also pay more attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they won't have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇开放性话题作文，针对很多人成了“手机控”这一现象，结合自己的亲身经历，谈一谈自己的观点。考生首先要阅读前面的提示去认真审题，确定出文章的中心，用一般现在时态来表达。要求从三个方面去完成写作：1. 手机的正面作用；2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。需要自由发挥的地方较多，比如手机的正面作用可以写有利于我们的沟通与交流，通过上网了解世界上所发生的事情，手机的负面作用可以写手机对健康的危害，对学生学习的影响等等。最后总结并发出呼吁。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
11．（·湖北中考模拟）在“让梦想照进现实”的主题班会上，同学们畅谈了自己在初中的变化及种种经历。李浩也讲述了自己英语学习的经历。假如你是李浩，请根据以下要点，用英语写出李浩的发言稿。 要点如下：
1.以前性格内向，对英语没什么兴趣，上课很少举手发言。 2.英语考试常不及格，曾经很沮丧，想放弃英语。 3.同学们及时伸出援手，自己开始认真对待英语学习。 4.两年来，英语水平有较大的提高。 5.梦想将来去说英语的国家深造。 6.自己的一些感想。（一两点） 注意：
词数60—80，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇： 1.frustrated adj.沮丧的 2.seldom adv. 很少，不常 3.put up 举起 Dear friends,
I’m very glad to talk about my English study here
【答案】Dear friends,
I’m very glad to talk about my English study here. My name is Li Jie. I used to be an extremely shy and introverted girl and was not interested in English. I seldom raised my hand in class. As a result, I often failed in English exams. I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English. It's you, my classmates, who helped me in time. So I began to take English learning seriously.
Over the past two years, I think my English has improved a lot. I dreamed to study in an English-speaking country and I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country. I think my English will make great progress there. Thank you. 【解析】 【分析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to do，talk about，used to be，be interested in，as a result，at the party，give up，dream to do等。文中I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English./It's you, my classmates, who helped me in time./I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country./I think my English will make great progress there.等多种从句结构的综合运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
12．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是Tom, 你的父亲工作很忙，经常熬夜，吸烟，很少吃早餐，也没有时间锻炼，所以身体不太好。6月17日是父亲节，请你根据你父亲的情况，给他写一封信，谈谈你的看法并给他提一些具体的建议。 要求:1. 意思连贯，语言流畅，语法正确，书写规范。 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。
3. 词数:80词左右，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Dad,
This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.
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_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Happy Father’s Day, Dad!
Yours, Tom
【答案】Dear Dad,
This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father's Day, and I sincerely wish you good health. I know that you are busy working all day and often stay up late to work. The next day you often go to work without having breakfast. You smoke a lot to relieve the pressure of work, but it’s really bad for your health. Long hours of work and little exercise make you unhealthy, I am worried about your body.
Health is more important to you. I hope you can take care of your body and don’t stay up late at night. Smoking is harmful to health, so give up smoking as soon as possible. I hope you can exercise in your spare time. I wish you have a strong and healthy body. Happy Father’s Day, Dad!
Yours, Tom
【解析】 【详解】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。通读材料可知，这是一篇向父亲表达情感的写作。因为是写给父亲的一封书信，因此人称为第二人称。时态为一般现在时态。要根据短文提示，把父亲身体不好的原因写清楚，并提出中肯的建议，表达出对父亲的体贴与关爱，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。
13．（·全国中考模拟）微笑是人类最美的语言。某英文报以“Smiles”为题,举办中学生征文活动。请根据下面的图表信息,写一篇英语短文。内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事给予你的启示。
提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3.词 数不少于80。
【答案】Smiles
A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. It
warms our hearts and helps us get on well with each other. A person who often smiles usually brings good luck. What’s more, smile can give us confidence.
When I was young, I was very shy. I was afraid to speak in public. One day, I needed to give a speech in my English class. I was so frighten that I did badly at the beginning. But when I saw a big smile on my teacher’s face, I got more and more confident. Finally, I made it.
Smiles are very helpful in our daily lives. We should often keep smiles on our faces, If we are happy, we smile. If we meet difficulties, we should smile, too. Let’s smile to life. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。要求以“Smiles”为题，根据图表提示信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事给予你的启示。根据所给的提示材料可知文章时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。 【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
14．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟）写作。
Having studied in this school for almost three years, you are about to graduate （毕业）. There must be something that you will always remember. Please write a passage about your Junior school life. The following points should be included. 1. How your junior school life is. 2. Things/moments that you won’t forget. 3. The regrets in the three years. 4. Plans for your future. 5. A natural ending.
【答案】I'm lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and become stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future.
And I believe I can do it.
【解析】学生们已经度过了三年的初中生活，在这三年里，一定有一些事是他们无法忘记的。这篇作文要求学生们介绍一下自己的初中生活。题目中列出了一些要点，如初中生活的感受、难忘的事情或时刻、后悔的事情、未来的计划，然后再加上一个自然的结尾。写作时，我们就可以利用这些要点来组织语言，充实文章的内容。通过分析可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，注意谓语动词形式的变化。另一个难点是英语表达和汉语习惯是不一样的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句式整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型。可以多用简单句，如主谓宾结构、主系表结构等，点缀一些并列句和复合句或较高级的句型，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。合理安排文章结构，注意语句之间的衔接，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，要点全面，并且结构安排合理，层次清晰。短文首先介绍了自己对三年初中生活、老师以及同学们的感受；然后介绍了自己在这三年里后悔的事情；接下来是对未来的计划以及对老师和同学们的祝福。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，谓语动词形式变化准确，语法规范，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中长短句结合，使文章富于变化，有节奏感。短文中还使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. 、In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and become stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future.等。
15．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
追星是青少年中普遍存在的问题。请根据以下要点，同时说明你自己的观点。
1.以偶像为榜样，学习他们的优点，严格要求自己。 赞同 2.当遇到不开心的事，想到偶像会很开心。 3.忘记学习的压力。 1.为了追星，浪费时间、金钱和精力。 不赞同 2.影响学习。 3.不能面对现实，整天梦想成为明星。 你的观点 …… （发挥1-2点） 注意：1. 词数90左右。短文开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 2. 条理清晰，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。 3. 短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
4. 以…为榜样： follow a good example of sb. 面对现实: face reality Nowadays, lots of students become star chasers.
九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧讲解及练习题(含答案)
