2024年高考英语作文必背句型(精品)
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:
1.时间和地点; 2.内容:学习唐诗;
3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
优秀满分作文
Dear Leslie,
How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson.
The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.
If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
全国II卷
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2024年高考英语作文必背句型(精品)
2.展览内容。 注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 分析:
第一步:审题:1.确定文体:题目中明确要求写邮件邀请Henry,所以用书信体格式。 2.确定时态:参加艺术展,还没有去展会也尚未开始,用一般将来时;此外介绍剪纸艺术应用一般现在时。3.确定人称:题目明确要求“假定你是李华”,所以用第一人称“I”。
第二步:扩展:题目中并没有直接告诉我们展览的细节,所以我们必须要将其展开。时间、地点自己来定,当然中国剪纸艺术展举办地点不能太“小”,选一个既大气自己又会写的单位,时间最好选在周末。此外,其它细节得自己来添加,否则字数远远不够。比如展会的门票收不收费,展会的内容有哪些,可不可以拍照留念等等。
第三步:结构:最好将整篇文章分成3~4段。
学生满分作文
Dear Henry
I'm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I'm glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.
The exhibition, the theme of which is \ of China\ will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club's works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.
I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
2024年高考英语作文必背句型(精品)
Yours, Li Hua 点评:
1.逻辑性较好,层次分明,连贯恰当; 2.运用词块、句型丰富;
3.个别用词需要改进,比如说leader不符英语表达习惯; 4.第一段不够简洁。
高考作文写作的十大注意事项:
1. 在写作之前,首先对题目进行认真的审清,并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来,这些单词、句型都应是经典的,不会错的。
2. 写作中,多注意使用起承转合的过渡词,使文章更富有条理,层次分明。 3. 多注意使用定语从句,包括非限制性定语从句。要熟悉英美人写文章的习惯,遇到地名、人名最好用非限制性定语从句,强调唯一性。
4. 多注意使用副词、形容词起到修饰的作用,并注意切忌重复,多使用不同的表达进行转述。多使用高级词汇。
5. 多注意使用被动、倒装、虚拟语气及非谓语动词作定语这样的表达。 6. 学会替换,对不会写的进行替换,换一种说法表达清楚即可 7. 长短句搭配使用。适当分段,切忌一段式作文。 8. 切忌使用Chinglish,改变逐字逐句翻译的不良习惯。 9. 文章中代词要指代明确,拿不准时,宁愿不用代词指代。
10. 英语单词不宜写得太小,卷面保持整洁,写错的地方只需轻轻划一笔就行,忌反复
全国 III 卷
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友
2024年高考英语作文必背句型(精品)
Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:
1.球队活动;
2.报名方式及截止日期。 注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
满分范文
Dear Eric,
I am Li Hua. Occasionallylearning that you are addicted to tennis, I am writing to sincerely invite youto join the table tennis team in our school aimed at developing our interestsand improving our skills.
Considering the enormousbenefits, which we can earn steadily from tennis practice, including preventingus from getting shortsighted and keeping physically healthy, we are lost intraining course. Definitely, as for the activities, we will be honor to begiven high-level training by a professional coach every Friday around 3-5 pm. Meanwhile,we would be divided into several groups to conduct competitions every two weeks.
If you are interested inwhat I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st.
I’m looking forward to yourreply even your appearance in our training center soon.
Yours, Li Hua
北京卷
书面表达(满分25分)
2024年高考英语作文必背句型(精品)
第一节 (15分)
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours, Li Hua 第一节 Dear Jim,
I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China. Yours Li Hua
2024年高考英语作文必背句型(精品)



