2024高考英语作文训练
李仕才
作文训练之书信（信+人际关系）
范文学习 假定你是李华，你结束了在新西兰的英语学习，刚回到上海。请给你的新西兰好友LindaDear Linda, 写一封信，感谢她期间对你的帮助，要点如下： How is everything going with you? I’ve returned to Shanghai, tired but happy. I 1. 写信的原因； can’t thank you enough for all the kindness you offered during my stay in New 2. 叙述自己在新西兰期间所得 Zealand. 到的具体帮助； 1) 英语学习上的;进步 2）生活上的； 3. 表达良好的祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2.可适当增加细节。 范文抄写：
When I first got there, I found it hard to use English properly. It was you who always helped me with patience. Now I have made such great progress that I can speak English more fluently. I even have a larger vocabulary than before. I am not scared of English any more. When I was homesick, you kept me company, chatting, playing games or showing me around the scenic spots. You made me feel as if I were one of your family members. There are so many wonderful memories fresh in my mind. In addition, please remember me to your parents. Best wishes! Yours Li Hua 1
句型提示：
1、书信功能句： 2、英语作文万能句：
1）I am writing to you to …(谈写信目的)
2) I am looking forward to your reply. （写信结束语）
3) I would appreciate it if you could … 如果你能…，我将非常感激。 4) I wonder if you could … 我想您是否能….
5) Would it be possible for you to …? 您是否可以。。。？ 6) Would it be convenient for you to …? 您是否方便…? 7) I would like to … 我想要…
8) It would be better for you to … 您最好… 9) You might as well … 您最好…
10) If I were you, I would …. 如果我是你，我会… 11） Would you please …? Could you …? 请您… 3、英语作文常用句式：
1) 主+谓+…,doing/done … 2) 主+谓+…,which/who 从句 3）主，同位语，+谓+… 4）主+谓+…,with 结构
5）What +从句 is that 从句
6）强调句或倒装句（起强调作用，需要强调时，用）
7）其他：so/such …that…; It is …before …; too … to …等 作文仿写 写作训练（4）
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假定你是来自英国的旅游者约翰.史密斯， 现用英语给十中的校长写一封感谢信， 内容如下：
1.昨天你在公园游览时丢失钱包，里面有很多钱，还有护照和机票。
2.当晚有一个男孩找到你的房间，送还拾到的钱包。你想给钱他作为感谢，被他拒绝。 3.你从宾馆经理那里获悉，他是十中的学生，名叫李华。 注意;
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计 入总词数。
思路点拨：1、人称：第一人称为主；时态：一般过去时为主；2、要点：1）简单自我介绍；
2）丢失钱包的经历；3）李华送还钱包的经历；4）表示对李华和校长的感谢。
参考句型：1. It was his help and kindness that made my trip here special and enjoyable;
2. I can’t thank you enough for …
第一稿
Dear Sir.
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人教版2024高考英语作文训练(4)书信(信+人际关系)(含范文)
