短文改错专练(二)
Test 1
[2024·成都第三次诊断] Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my achievement and the voluntary work I have done. After complete the online admission process, I took a deep breathe and dreamed about my dream college. However, except offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I total got eight rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room but thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn nothing from the experience even though those rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. For this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.
答案与解析：
Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my achievement and the voluntary work I have done. After complete ①achievements
②had
③completing
the online admission process, I took a deep breathe and dreamed
④breath
about my dream college. However, except ∧ offer from the
⑤an/the
University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I total got eight
⑥totally
rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room but thought about
⑦and
what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn nothing from
⑧something
the experience even though those rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. For this
⑩With
attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.
①achievement改为achievements 考查名词。根据该句中的“all of”可知，这里表示不止一项成就，故要用名词复数。
②have改为had 考查动词。根据本句中的“listed”可知，这里讲述的是过去的经历，此处表示截止到过去这个时间点我已经做的志愿者工作，故要用过去完成时。
③complete改为completing 考查非谓语动词。介词After后面要用动名词，故应改为completing。
④breathe改为breath 考查名词。根据前面的冠词a和形容词deep可知，此处应用名词，take a deep breath固定短语“深吸一口气”。
⑤except后加an/the 考查冠词。offer为可数名词，故前面要用限定词修饰；此处可表泛指，且offer的发音以元音音素开头，故用an；也可表特指，故用the。
⑥total改为totally 考查副词。修饰动词got要用副词形式。 ⑦but改为and 考查连词。“我将自己锁在房间里”和“思考我所做的一切”之间不存在转折关系，而是顺承关系，故要用and。
⑧nothing改为something 考查代词。根据句中的“even though”并结合语境可知，虽然之前被拒绝让“我”很伤心，但是“我”也从中学到了一些东西，故要用something。
⑨删除made前的were 考查语态。此处表示那些拒绝让我伤心，应用主动语态。
⑩For改为With 考查介词。此处表示“带着这样一种态度”，故应用介词With。
Test 2
[2024·郑州高三第一次质量预测] This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply.
Being a capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of place of interest. Among them the West Lake is the best-known attraction, where water seem to
melt into the sky by the distance. Besides, there are several museums locating in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of deliciously local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, but they are working hard make the city more beautiful.
What attractive and inviting Hangzhou is! 答案与解析：
This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply.
Being a capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in
②the
the southeast of China. There are a lot of place of interest. Among
③places
them the West Lake is the best-known attraction, where water seem ④seems
to melt into the sky by the distance. Besides, there are several
⑤in
museums locating in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's
⑥located
more, you can enjoy many kinds of deliciously local food such as
⑦delicious
West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, but they are working hard ∧ make the city
⑧and
⑨to
more beautiful.
What attractive and inviting Hangzhou is!
⑩How
①删除had 考查时态。had done为过去完成时，表示“过去的过去”。但在此句中，visited先发生，impressed后发生，因此用一般过去时，had多余，故删除。
②a改为the 考查冠词。杭州为浙江省的省会，此处表示特指，故把a改为the。
③place改为places 考查名词。place为可数名词，且根据该句中的“a lot of”可知，此处应用其复数形式。
④seem改为seems 考查时态和主谓一致。根据该句中的“is”可知，此处叙述一般的情况，应用一般现在时；该从句的主语是water，是不可数名词，故用seems。
⑤by改为in 考查介词。in the distance固定短语“在远处，在远方”，故把by改为in。
⑥locating改为located 考查非谓语动词。be located in固定短语“位于……”，此处省略了be动词，故用过去分词短语作后置定语。
⑦deliciously改为delicious 考查形容词。根据语境及该句中的“local food”，可知此处应用形容词delicious。
⑧but改为and 考查连词。此处前面意为“这里的人友好、善良”，此处后面意为“他们正在努力工作以使这座城市更美丽”，根据句意可知，前后句之间为并列关系，而不是转折关系，因此把but改为and。
⑨hard后加to 考查非谓语动词。参见上题解析。此处应用动词不定式作目的状语，故在hard后加to。
⑩What改为How 考查感叹句。根据该句中的“attractive and
inviting”以及“How＋adj.＋主语＋谓语”结构可知，此处应用How来引导该感叹句。
Test 3
[2024·福建省质量检查] As everybody know, parents are worried too much about their child, especially when the young meet with challenges. So do my parents. They are even more nervous than I when a important test is coming. I have been thinking about talked to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve them. When they are convincing that I'll be responsible for that what I should do, they surely won't feel worried. Please keep in mind that our parents love us unconditional. I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents.
答案与解析：
As everybody know， parents are worried too much
①knows
about their child， especially when the young meet with challenges.
②children
So do my parents. They are even more nervous than I when a
③are
④an
important test is coming. I have been thinking about talked to them.
⑤talking
I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve them.
⑥it
When they are convincing that I'll be responsible for that what I
⑦convinced
should do, they surely won't feel worried. Please keep in mind that our parents love us unconditional. I hope my thought can be helpful to
⑨unconditionally
you in dealing ∧ the relationship with your parents.
⑩with
①know改为knows 考查时态和主谓一致。句意：众所周知，父母太担心他们的孩子了，尤其是当孩子遇到挑战的时候。该句陈述的是客观情况，故用一般现在时；主语为everybody，为第三人称单数，故谓语动词用单数。
②child改为children 考查名词。该处表示“他们的孩子”， child为可数名词，由该句中的“parents”和“their”可知，该处应用复数形式children。
③do改为are 考查倒装句。句意：我的父母也是如此。此处表示前一句话中的谓语所说明的情况也适用于本句主语；根据前
一句中的“are worried”可知，该处应用are。
④a改为an 考查冠词。该处泛指“一场重要的考试”，故用不定冠词；important的发音以元音音素开头，故用不定冠词an。
⑤talked改为talking 考查非谓语动词。about为介词，后接动名词talking作宾语。
⑥them改为it 考查代词。句意：“我”会让他们知道“我”有一个目标并且会努力地去实现它。此处代指前面的“a goal”，为单数，故用it。
⑦convincing改为convinced 考查固定用法。句意：当他们确信“我”会对“我”应该做的事情负责时，他们想必不会感到担心。be convinced that...固定短语“确信……”。
⑧删除that 考查宾语从句。分析句子结构可知，该处为宾语从句，作介词for的宾语，连接词what在从句中作do的宾语，句子成分完整，that多余，故删除。
⑨unconditional改为unconditionally 考查副词。一般用副词修饰动词，此处修饰动词love，故用副词形式unconditionally。
⑩dealing后加with 考查介词。句意：我希望我的想法能对你处理与父母之间的关系有所帮助。deal with固定短语“处理，应付”。
Test 4
[2024·昆明质量检测] Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students choose to work as either cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 student to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of a advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed practically skills which are necessary for them to face future challenges. The most important thing I've learned are to improve myself after I get my dream job.
答案与解析：
Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students choose to work as either
①chose
cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500
②or
student to join in the activity. I decided ∧ be an assistant in a photo
③students
④to
2024版高考英语大二轮专题复习新方略专练：专题五 短文改错专练(二)
