(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达常见题型及答题技巧及练习题(含
答案)含解析
一、英语书面表达
1.假定你是David,来自美国,你的QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者,他来信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件,并根据信中的内容和实际用英语回复,可以有适当的发挥。 To: davidwoodlandschool@qq.com From: limingsunshineschool@qq.com Subject: Volunteering Dear David, I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? ●Why do you want to be a volunteer? ●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? ●Do you have any problems with volunteering? ●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Li Ming 注意:1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好,不计入总词数; 2.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.
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I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.
I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on. It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news. Best wishes David 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,给好友Li Ming回信,介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I'm glad……,we can……,It’s OK to……,If your parents don’t allow you to…….,you should……,I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。 点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴,接下来介绍我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题,最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
2.书面表达
假如你是Amy,德国的交换生Sara下周即将来你家寄宿,昨天你收到她的来信,在信中,她询问如下信息:1.你家情况;2.有关餐桌礼仪;3. 她要承担的家务劳动;4. …现在,你就她提出的问题给她回信,也预祝她在你家过得开心! 要求:1. 文章必须包括图片中主要内容,可适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息; 3. 字数约110词。 Dear Sara,
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday._____________________________________________ Love, Amy
【答案】Dear Sara,
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.
I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The
appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say \ As for housework, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.
Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes. Love, Amy 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如be glad to,hear from,unlike in the West,on the table,a sign of,help sb. do,do some housework,wash the dishes,clean the room,make the bed,take care of,how to do等。而复杂并列结构In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone.和If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3.书面表达
随着电子时代的到来,西方文化如潮水般涌来,中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课(set up traditional culture classes),但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件,给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文,词数80左右,谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。 Your opinion Your reasons Your suggestion necessary or unnecessary the root (根) of Chinese culture, know more about, spread, develop … Dear editor,
As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Mike
【答案】Dear editor,
As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.
First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture. All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes! Yours, Mike
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Chinese traditional culture is facing……,it’s necessary for schools to……,we shouldn’t……,They can raise……,it is of great importance to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题,接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因,最后号召更多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of, in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4.假设你是来自中国的中学生李华,打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营,看完了这个网页后,你打算给Liz Payne留言,表达你在冬令营期间想去London Canal Museum参观的愿望。 内容包括: 1.简单介绍自己;
2.留言目的(包含冬令营的时间,听Liz Payne的讲座); 3.预期收获。 作文要求:
1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名;
2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear Liz Payne, I’m Li Hua,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Liz Payne,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK. I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份,给Liz Payne写一个留言。文章内容主要包括三个部分:首先是介绍自己的身份;然后写留言的目的,包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观London Canal Museum以及听Liz Payne的讲座;最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作时,应根据题目的这些要求,组织语言,串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知,这篇短文应使用第一人称I来叙述,时态应以一般将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和汉语习惯是不同的,不能逐词翻译,而应从句子的整体考虑,使用正确的句式结构以及适当的词汇、短语和句型,保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式,提升文章档次和水平,使表达更加流畅。
点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,包含了题目要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。作者主要从三个方面叙述:首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的;接下来详细介绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望;最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好,那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以第一人称、一般将来时和一般现在时为主,谓语动词形式准发,语法规范,符合英语句子的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为主,也使用了一些复合句和较高级的句型,如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation.中使用了宾语从句;From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp.中有一个非限制性定语从句;And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal.中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇文章语句通顺、意思连贯、表达流畅。
5.书面表达
每个人都有自己心爱的物品,相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧!请以“A(n) _____ I