buyers and suppliers globally, and for finding co-operative business partners in China.
两三句说说你工作都做了什么当然还不够，这些工作到底教会了你什么呢？ These experiences in Finland and especially Brazil were invaluable. They enhanced my ability to work effectively in multicultural teams and to manage employees with different backgrounds. I also learned how to handle situations which require a change of plans to reach the end goal. I expect that your program will offer me a more focused opportunity to develop my skills in my personal development, which I believe will continue by being immersed with different cultures. I believe that your course will best equip me to achieve these aims. 表达自己学会了和不同背景的人打交道，并且在情况改变的情况下能够很好适应。最后和开头段落链接起来，表达自己就是一个喜欢不同文化的人，而你的课程可以帮助我继续和不同文化的人打交道。
就像语文老师教过我们的那样，文章要有起承转合。大家可以思考下自己的申请信是否做到了这几点？
问题4：没有清晰结构，思路混乱
虽然有句歌词唱得好：跟着感觉走，但大家千万别跟着自己的感觉写申请信。一会儿说自己的成绩有多棒，一会跳到自己参加的活动有很多，一会儿说自己过去喜欢旅游，一会又跳到自己专业知识有多丰富。唉，这样的申请信没有丝毫的逻辑严谨
性。
tips：画思维导图帮助理顺思路
在英国求学期间，老师经常叫我们画思维导图。在纸上，把自己所有想要表达的观点一一列举。
写作个人陈述时，我建议大家把想说的都写出来然后归类。所有和学术相关的内容归为一类，所有和实习工作相关的归为一类，所有无关紧要的，归为一类然后剔除，最后再按照一定顺序和逻辑去架构自己的文章。
初稿完成后，建议大家找几个专业人士读你的个人陈述。我当时找了大概有10-15个的native speaker的朋友帮我修改，他们给了很中肯的意见，并且我发现只改语法是不够的，写作思路与结构也需要提高。
会计专业个人陈述范文
Born in 1974 to parents who valued education above everything else, I consistently excelled my classmates in primary and high school. My father, a senior engineer of a huge manufacturing company, would not accept any second best performance in my studies, and I never disappointed him. One way for me to stay the top student was to pursue a wide variety of interests that helped to keep me physically strong and intellectually sharp. As an acclaimed football player, I led my high school’s football team as its captain into winning the city’s football championship. I also enjoyed literature, music and traveling.
As the best student of my high school, I was well prepared in 1991 when I took the National University Entrance Examinations, held nationwide once every year to screen high school graduates for higher education. Of the
100,000 high school graduates who took the exams that year in my province, I ranked the fourth in overall scores. On the strength of these scores, I gained acceptance into the Finance & Accounting Department of the Beijing
University, which President Clinton described as the Harvard of China on his recent trip to this country.
At the Beijing University, the country’s best institution of higher learning, I continued to be the best student of the class. The university’s business
school, to which the Finance & Accounting Department belongs, emphasizes, English and computers. I did well in all of them. In the final exams, I got the full grade for calculus, and the highest grade in my class in statistics, liner algebra, microeconomics, finance, banking and econometrics. My average grade was 90 on the 1 to 100 scale, making me the undisputed academic leader among my fellow students.
I began to have significant academic publications while I was still an undergraduate student, something highly unusual in China. Taking advantage of the university’s well cultivated atmosphere of academic freedom, I undertook extensive research on top of my regular course load, which culminated in the publication of a book, titled “Out of Dilemma”. As the principal author of the book, I made sure that the book presented an insightful study of the Western business management methods, especially those proven effective in the experience of the Fortune 500 corporations. The book was unique at the time in that detailed case studies were presented on a number of well-known Chinese companies against the Western business management approaches introduced in the book.
I was also the only undergraduate in my department who published a research paper in an academic journal. In the “The investment risk and its measurement”, published in the January 1996issue of Chinese Technology and Economy Science, I presented a mathematical model I myself have
developed on the measurement of market risks. Although the model has yet to be proven in empirical research, it has received positive review among
Chinese economists. It should serve as an advanced starting point for me to conduct further studies and research.
With an impeccable academic record and virtually unprecedented publications, I received many awards and honors, including the Outstanding Student Honor in October 1992, the Guanghua Scholarship in 1994, and the Outstanding Student Honor in 1996. In recognition of my achievements, the Business School of the Beijing University offered in 1996 to accept me for
graduate studies without the normally mandatory examinations, a privilege that is granted to only what the university considers the exceptionally gifted.
I, however, declined the offer by my alma mater. Instead, I joined the Chinese DaChuan (Group) Company, one of the world’s biggest shipping companies, to work with its Planning & Financial Division at its headquarters in Beijing. I wanted to apply what I had learned both in class and outside of it to analysis of real business operations before I commenced my graduate studies.
That has since proved to be the right decision. Working with the Chinese DaChuan Company, with its 117 branches around the world, gave me a vantage point from which I easily and regularly observe all sorts of financial activities, such as the capital flow, the investment, the making of accounting statements, the cost control, and the innovation in accounting computer systems. This has not only enriched my knowledge of finance and given me clear perception into the company itself but also provided me with the necessary empirical data for more advanced studies in general.
While with the Chinese DaChuan Company, I saw firsthand just how big the differences are between the accounting practices in China and those in the developed world. To summarize my observations, I published a paper titled “The Comparison between Foreign Accounting Information System and Domestic Accounting Information System” in the respected journal of Finance and Accounting for Communications. On the basis of these observations, I began to appreciate China’s critical need to learn the more sophisticated
accounting practices from the West. In accounting as in so many other areas, China must bridge the gap with the West if it is to survive and develop in the developing in the ever shrinking global village.
Two years has passed since I first started at the Chinese DaChuan Company, and I now feel that it is essential that I receive further and more advanced training in a quality Western university. Hence my application for acceptance into your university.
个人陈述(PS)范文—会计专业
