2020届新高考英语书面表达“内容概要”高三作文模拟练习（六）
写作指导与解读
一、概写原题 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
For many parents, making sure their children get the right amount of sleep can be stressful. This is especially true during high-pressure times such as exams when students tend to study all night for the next day. Unfortunately, it is often counterproductive(适得其反的) because with fewer hours to sleep, the teen brain doesn't get enough time to lay down what they've studied the night before.
In her groundbreaking book The Teenage Brain, neuroscientist Dr.Frances Jensen explains that bedtime isn't simply a way for the body to relax and recover after working, studying or playing a hard day. It is the glue that allows us not only to recollect our experiences but also to remember everything we've learned that day. Basically the more we learn, the more we need to sleep, which is why a good sleep is of great importance in achieving success at school.
Then how much sleep do teenagers need? There is no magic number for exactly how much sleep teenagers need, but the Austrian Centre for Education in Sleep(ACES)suggests 8 to 10 hours per day for high school adolescents. What happens if they don't get enough sleep? According to ACES, poor sleep will have all sorts of negative effects on teenagers, including rise in blood pressure, mood swings and impatient behaviors. Without adequate sleep the focus and attention
drifts making it harder to receive information. The brain can no longer function to deal with information properly and access previously learned information.
So, how can parents help? If you think your child needs more sleep, try making gradual changes to their sleeping habits. Small increases have been shown to be effective in changing sleep patterns. And remember your children are going through a period of their lives when their brains and bodies are going through a lot of changes. Not only is your job to help make changes, it's also to ride the wave with them. It may not be easy, but they will thank you for it eventually.
二、概写步骤 第一步：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，理清各段落之间的逻辑关系，提取全文中心词，尤其是名词与动词。
第二步：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动词与名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点。
第三步：根据所划内容，结合理解，理清句内逻辑关系，然后转述或合成句子。可用中文概括出段落大意，然后用一句话翻译出来(合理利用原词)。
第四步：通读修改。要考虑句首连接词的使用、高级词汇的替换、句式的多样、语法是否正确以及字数的多少等。
第五步：用衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。
三、分段概括 关键词句已在原文标出，结合理解，用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。
?由于考试压力，家长们很难让孩子有充足的睡眠。
Due to learning stress, it is challenging for parents to let their children get adequate sleep.
?一位专家指出，充足的睡眠有助于我们回忆所学的知识，而且更多的睡眠会导致
较好的学习成绩。
An expert points out that enough sleep helps us recall what we've learned and that more sleep gives rise to better academic performance at school.
?一般来说，青少年每天需要大约8到10小时，否则睡眠不足会对他们的健康、
行为和注意力产生负面影响。
Generally, teenagers need approximately 8 to 10 hours a day, otherwise lack of sleep will negatively affect their health, behaviors, and attention.
?因此，家长在必要时应帮助孩子改变睡眠习惯。
Therefore, parents, if necessary, should help make some change in their child's sleeping habits.
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2020届新高考英语书面表达“内容概要”高三作文模拟练习(六)写作指导和解读(含范文)
