2024中考英语写作金选(三)
Passage--A
(2024贺州中考改编)书面表达。
假设你是Susan,在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求,有时你是否感到厌烦?你是怎样解决的?请你根据下列表格提示用英语写一篇短文。
父母的要求 你的看法 每天打扫房间;不能玩电脑游戏;晚上10点前必须睡觉…… 虽太严厉,但理解他们…… 你的解决方式 与父母多交流;为父母做些家务…… 要求:1.文章必须包括表格中所给提示内容,可以展开思路,自由地适当发挥; 2.不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息; 3.词数80左右。
My__name__is__Susan.There__are__too__many__rules__in__my__family.I__have__to__clean__the__room__every__day.I__am__not__allowed__to__play__computer__games__in__my__free__time.I__must__go__to__bed__by__10__p.m.I__think__my__parents__are__too__strict__with__me.Sometimes__I__feel__bored
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but__I__know__they__really__love__me.I__communicate__with__my__parents__as__much__as__possible
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sharing__my__happiness__and__sadness__with__them.And__I__often__help__them__do__housework.These__are__my__good__ways__to__get__on__well__with__them.
Passage--B
温馨提示:(短文书写于答题卡卷II规定的位置。)
学校决定本周星期六(2011年5月14日)晚上以班为单位召开家长座谈会,会议将于七点半开始,地点是本班教室。届时将通报孩子在校学习情况,并就如何促使孩子学好功课征求家长意见。请你代替八年级(4)班班主任杨老师用英语向林涛的家长写一份邀请书。 要求:①格式正确,语言流畅,表达清楚;②书写规范,字迹清楚;③词数:70-80. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】One possible version: INVITATION Dear Mr/Mrs Lin;
I’m glad to invite you to come to our parents’ meeting in our school at 7:30 p.m. on Saturday, May 14. We will hold the parents’ meeting in the classroom of Class 4, Grade 8.At the meeting we will tell you something about your son’s study. We will also listen to your advice on how to improve all his lessons. We hope you can come on time.
Hope to see you then!
Sincerely Mr. Yang
Passage--C
请仔细审图,假设这是Jane的房间,请你根据提示词汇帮她描述一下房间内物品的摆放情况. 要求:以第一人称描述,不少于40词.开头已给出,不计入总词数.
提示词汇:bed,shoes(鞋),picture,wall(墙),bookcase,clock,computer,
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This is my room.It's very clean!
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1. This is my room(高分句型).It's very clean!(引出话题)There is a big bed.My shoes are near the bed(高分句型).My alarm clock is on the dresser.Those are my pictures.They are on the wall.Where are my books?Look!They are in my bookcase.And on the desk are my computer and some CDs.(具体介绍房间内物品的摆放情况) 【解析】这是一篇图片作文.本文要求按照题目要求结合图片中的内容完成这篇介绍房间摆设的作文.写作中要包含房间内物品的摆放位置、注意方位的描述等.根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题.写作中注意上下文的过度,符合逻辑关系. 高分句型:
①This is my room.这是我的房间.句子中This is表示这是什么,用以介绍某人或者某物. ②My shoes are near the bed.我的鞋子在床附近.这里near the bed表示在床附近. 这篇短文简明、扼要地介绍了房间的布局,并包含了文中所要求的基本信息.其中句式灵活、多变,介词短语的准确使用为文章增色不少.如on the bed,under the bed,Those are my pictures.,Where are my books?Look!,最为值得称道的是倒装句式的运用很到位,如And on the desk are my computer and some CDs.学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
Passage--D
今天,你与妈妈在家里后电视新闻时,了解到我国刚刚颁布了对公共场馆的全面“禁烟令”。吸烟不仅浪费金钱,对自己、他人的健康以及环境造成极大危害,而且易引发火灾,甚至造成人员伤亡。因而,你与妈妈商定,由你用英文向身为烟民的爸爸列出吸烟的五点危害,力劝他戒烟。
注意:可以参考以下词汇:cause, waste, harm, pollute, lose 【参考范文】1. Smoking can cause a lot of illness. 2. Smoking will waste much money. 3. Smoking is harmful for your health. 4. Smoking will pollute the air.
5. Smoking will make you lose some friends. Passage--E
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