广东省教育研究院2014年科研课题《初中英语写作教学的创新体验研究》最终成果
八年级上册Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister. 写作教学案
（教师使用）
【话题】人的个性特征(Personal traits)
【写作目标】能运用本单元所学描述人物个性特征及行为习惯的形容词和副词描述朋友及他人。
【课前任务】
一、写出下列短语。
1、外向的 2、四十岁
3、一个幸福的家 4、与……相处得好 5、帮我们学英语 6、擅长下棋
参考答案：1.outgoing 2.forty years old 3.a happy family 4.get along well with 5.help us with our English 6 .be good at playing chess
二、根据汉语意思完成下列句子。 1、他的课非常有趣。 His classes are . 2、他从不吸烟。 He . 3、我的同学大部分都喜欢他。 my classmates like him. 4、我妹妹比我高一点儿。 My younger sister is than me. 参考答案：1.very interesting 2.never smokes 3.Most of 4. a little taller
三、写出与本话题有关的词汇和句型。 常用词汇：
than, much , outgoing ,music , tall , both , though , tell jokes , look different , make me laugh
经典句型：
I think …
She/He is …than …
A good friend likes to do the same things as me.
It’s (not)necessary to be the same. He is outgoing.
He/She likes…
【课中任务】读写结合 一、A. 信息归纳
阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。
My name is Mary. I have a good friend Lily. In some ways, we look the same, and in some ways, we look different. We both have big eyes and long black hair. I'm much taller than her. We both like sports, although Lily is more athletic than me. She's more outgoing and I'm quieter. I like singing and she likes drawing. However, we both enjoy going to parties.
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广东省教育研究院2014年科研课题《初中英语写作教学的创新体验研究》最终成果
Information Card Something in common Something different
参考答案： 1.big eyes 2.sports 3.taller 4.quieter 5.drawing
They both have 1. and long black hair． They both like 2. ．They both enjoy going to parties． Mary is much 3. than Lily．Lily is more outgoing and Mary is 4. ．Mary likes singing and Lily likes 5. . B．赏析
找出上面材料中的好词好句。
Useful words: although ; however ; enjoy
Useful phrases: look the same ; look different ; in some ways Useful sentences: She's more outgoing and I'm quieter.
We both have big eyes and long black hair.
二、书面表达
假设你是Li Ming，请给你的美国笔友Tom 写一封e-mail ,介绍你的英语老师Mr.Lee。 要点如下：
1、他40岁，有一个幸福的家庭； 2、他性格外向，与学生相处的很好；
3、他的课堂很有趣，课后常帮我们学英语； 4、他不抽烟，非常喜欢运动，擅长下棋；
5、写一至两点其他同学对他的看法。
1、写作引导：
A. 重点短语 写出下列短语。
1、和……一样友好 2、努力学习 3、和……一样高 4、唱得好
参考答案：1. as friendly as 2. study hard 3. as tall as 4. sing well
B. 重点句型 根据汉语意思完成下列句子。
1、蒂姆留的头发比萨姆短。
Tim has hair Sam.
2、我们俩都喜欢运动，尽管她看上去比我更健美。
We like sports, she looks than me. 3、蒂娜更外向一些，泰拉更严肃一些。
Tina is , but Tara is . 4、莉莉是我最好的朋友，和我相比她更镇静一些。
Lily is my best . She is than me. 5、戴夫擅长打篮球。
Dave is playing basketball. 参考答案：1. shorter, than 2. both, though, more athletic 3. more outgoing, more serious 4. friend, calmer 5. good at
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广东省教育研究院2014年科研课题《初中英语写作教学的创新体验研究》最终成果
C. 写作技能指导
本单元写作涉及的话题是“谈论人的个性特征”的信件，因此要注意写信的格式，时态应选用一般现在时。在写作时，要做到：1﹚要点齐全；2）条理清晰
D. 写作思路点拨
Ⅰ、引入话题→How are you recently ?Now I’ll tell you something about my English teacher…
Ⅱ、具体介绍老师的情况→①.forty years old ②.a happy family ③.outgoing and gets along well with
④.helps us with our English ⑤.never smokes ⑥.likes sports ⑦.is good at playing chess Ⅲ、评价→①. Most of my classmates like him … ②.a good teacher , a good friend
2、实践写作（含小组讨论、改评修正、赏析作品）
【我的草稿】
【我的作品】
【我的订正】
3、参考范文
Dear Tom,
How are you recently? Now I’ll tell you something about my English teacher Mr. Lee.
Mr. Lee is forty years old .He has a happy family .He is outgoing gets along well with us students. His classes are very interesting. After class, he often helps us with our English. He never smokes. He likes sports. He is
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especially good at playing chess.
Most of my classmates like him and think he’s not only a good teacher but also a good friend. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Ming
点评：这篇文章符合电子邮件的写作要求，格式准确。能根据要点详细介绍了李老师的具体情况，谋篇布局合理。文章还采用了丰富的语言结构，一般现在时和第三人称单数形式运用准确。
【课后任务】读写结合 一、A. 信息归纳
阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信
I have a good friend. Her name is Lily. She's outgoing and intellectual(有才智的). Her father is a doctor and her mother teaches music in our school. Lily began to learn singing when she was only three. She is good at singing now. She has a guitar and plays it well. So we always ask her to our birthday parties. She often sings some popular songs at the parties. We all think she's a good girl and like her very much.
Information Card 1. Lily's mother is a teacher. 2. Lily is an girl. 3. Lily is good at playing the . 4. Lily's friends always ask her to their birthday . 5. Lily has a lot of . 参考答案：1. music 2. outgoing and intellectual 3. guitar 4. parties 5. friends
B．书面表达
假如你们班将组织一次以“朋友”为主题的英语研讨课。需要你们谈谈你好朋友的性格、爱好是否应该和你相同。请结合自身情况，写一篇70 词左右的英文发言稿来阐述你的观点。 Good morning, everyone!
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
参考范文：
Good morning, everyone!
Friends make our lives interesting and wonderful, but should friends be different or the same? Some people think that good friends should have the same interest, but I don’t think so. My best friend is more outgoing than me. She likes playing sports, but I’m quiet and I like to sit and watch her play. In my opinion ,a good friend always makes me happy. It’s not necessary to be the same.
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【教学反思】
4 人教版初中英语 单元话题写作指导
广东省教育研究院2014年科研课题《初中英语写作教学的创新体验研究》最终成果
八年级上册Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister. 写作学案
（学生使用）
【课前任务】
一、写出下列短语。
1、外向的 2、四十岁
3、一个幸福的家 4、与……相处得好 5、帮我们学英语 6、擅长下棋
二、根据汉语意思完成下列句子。
1、他的课非常有趣。 His classes are . 2、他从不吸烟。 He . 3、我的同学大部分都喜欢他。 my classmates like him. 4、我妹妹比我高一点儿。 My younger sister is than me.
三、写出与本话题有关的词汇和句型。
常用词汇：
经典句型：
5 人教版初中英语 单元话题写作指导
人教版新目标英语八年级上册Unit 3写作教学案
