around I am. Waves rocked the small boat, which began to turn sideways like an amusement park ride. “Get us out of here!” Tom screamed to Sam. “Let’s go back!”
With the winds and waves kicking up, the boat began to fill with water. Sam and Tom tried to pull in the fishing line together, but the high waves filled the boat with water, forcing Sam to make a hard decision. He cut the line, losing thousands of dollars worth of equipment and fish in the sea. He then pointed the boat toward a port five hours away. Sam then called his boss, William Fox, to report his position.
With dawn coming, Sam spotted the rise of the mountains on the horizon (地平线). He was figuring out a route through the dangerous waters when suddenly the motor stopped. “I couldn’t believe it,” Sam said. “We were 24 kilometers off the coast, and the motor died.” High waves raised and dropped the boat, sending the men crashing into the sides. “William, William!” Sam yelled into the radio. “If you’re coming to get me, come now!”
“We’re coming!” William shouted back. 注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:
Shortly after, the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore, driving the men farther out to sea.
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The next morning, Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance. _______________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Possible version 1:
Shortly after the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore, driving the men farther out to sea. Fear seized Tom and he was trembling, for the water had not only wet his clothes but also ruined his hope of surviving. Sam murmured, “I was warned that a storm was coming. Had it not been for my stubbornness, we would not have lost our equipment and had to face such a terrible situation.” His voice gradually disappeared as waves rocked the boat, making terrifying sounds. After what seemed to be a century, a great darkness fell. Exhausted, they fell asleep.
The next morning, Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance. He excitedly woke Tom up. Tom rubbed his eyes and stared. Once he caught sight of the boat, he was also lit up. The chance of surviving made them regain strength and they began to shout loudly. The boat saw them and they went aboard. On the boat they met William and other crew members. Although they had lost thousands of dollars, they came to understand the value of hope. Possible version 2:
,Shortly after, the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore, driving the men farther out to sea. They had been drifting for hours. After what seemed a century, suddenly Sam shouted and pointed at a nearby place, “Look! There is an island!” Sam and Tom quickly jumped into the sea, which became calmer, and they managed to land on the island. They were surprised to find that there were people living on it. The people there gave them some food. The storm seemed to be over and they had a good sleep that night.
The next morning. Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance. It belonged to the people on the island. These kind people gave the boat to Sam as a present and warned him that the storm would come back again in two days, so he must hurry up! Sam thanked them and set off on the route he had planned. After two days’ sailing, they finally reached the coast. At that time, Sam’s radio rang: “I’m William! I’m in the middle of the sea. The storm is rocking my boat terribly. Help me!” 【解析】 【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写，要求根据所给情节进行续写。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。时态应为一般过去时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；fear（恐惧），trembling（发抖的、战栗的），ruin（毁灭），survive（存活）， murmur（低声说、私下抱怨），terrifying（可怕的），darkness（黑暗），regain（恢复），value（价值），loudly（大声地），stubbornness（固执）及exhausted（筋疲力尽的）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示
了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be interested in（对……感兴趣），have to（不得不），fall asleep (睡着)，in the distance（远处），catch sight of (看见……)以及light up（呈现高兴的情绪），而且还使用了状语从句“Although they had lost thousands of dollars, they came to understand the value of hope.”，宾语从句“Sam murmured, “I was warned that a storm was coming.”，虚拟语气“Had it not been for my stubbornness, we would not have lost our equipment and had to face such a terrible situation.”，非谓语动词“Shortly after, the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore, driving the men farther out to sea.”及“His voice gradually disappeared as waves rocked the boat, making terrifying sounds. After what seemed to be a century, a great darkness fell.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
湖北省部分重点中学高一下学期期末联考英语试题 Word版含解析
